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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
Personify | 2 | 28.57% | |
•Para¶el• | 5 | 71.43% | |
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll |
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01-24-05, 04:17 PM | #16 | ||||
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This was feedback posted for Personify
IP: 1BD5 13B2
good luck to both. merk em personify..................
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01-24-05, 06:02 PM | #17 | ||||
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: •Para¶el•
•Para¶el•:your storyline was pretty good here, and you practically stayed on topic on this piece here Vocab was nice, hardly any mistakes, had a good balance between the complex and basic shit here. The emotion on ur drop was there, could've used a little more imagery, but it was all good here. Your structure was in place and not stretched everywhere and your flow was good too. But overall you had a good drop... Personify: Your structure was aight in ur drop, the flow was pretty good, and the vocab was good here too. Nice storyline by you, but overall you had a good drop also, nutting much though Overall: Kind of a close battle here, but •Para¶el• took this one though, just had a better drop to it... No Hate To You Though Personify
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01-24-05, 06:07 PM | #18 | |||
'Member Those Golden Days
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IP: 9BA3 5B64
Least this is getting voted on. If I lose I request a rematch Para
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01-24-05, 06:09 PM | #19 | |||||
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IP: CF38 FCAC
lol........fine with me....but yo personfy um mentally rhymes with disabilty look...and then i used emotion..but why are we complaining elts be kool about it ight...
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01-24-05, 06:59 PM | #20 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: 3D49 422E
Voted For: •Para¶el•
seriously u get this easyli i got to say, Parallel:Your vocab was dope,reminds me of eminem,i really was feeling this piece,everytime i vote i copie and past the best line but now i should copie and past the verse lmao very good,the structure was perfect,this flowed(idk if we can say that lol) Personify: reading your verse after reading parallel's verse is like,i want to read parallel's verse again,no hate but true,good structure,vocab was cool,nice flowing(once again lol) overall cool battle but i have to say Parallel Vote:Parallel |
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01-25-05, 10:49 PM | #21 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
ight ight......................................uppin... .....
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01-26-05, 10:49 PM | #22 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
uppin.............................................
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01-27-05, 11:08 AM | #23 | |||
'Member Those Golden Days
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IP: CCA8 57B3
Man I figured people would vote on this. Uppin....
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01-28-05, 08:49 AM | #24 | |||||||
Killin' G'z
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IP: D4FA A3B8
Voted For: •Para¶el•
Þaяallεl - Good spit man, you followed the topic well, flowed very well... and had some creative thinkin' in there.. with good emotion. 8.5/10 Golden.Days - Yours flowed very good, didnt rhyme is some places, but showed a good picture in my head and followed topic well. 8/10 Vote - Þaяallεl
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01-28-05, 12:23 PM | #25 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: CF38 FCAC
4-0 about to KO this kat...lets geet 1 more voe.....uppin
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01-28-05, 02:12 PM | #26 | ||||
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IP: D5FE 7245
Voted For: Personify
great battle...props to both flow-golden.days, parallels verse the first lines of each bar were good but then the second lines on a lot of them were too short...they didnt flow right, structure doesnt matter to me so theres really no point in keeping it all together, all you need is a good syllable count which golden.days had... imagery-none, didnt sense enough imagery from both...both had a significant amount of emotion though, but imagery was just lacking from both in my opinion emotion-golden.days, parallels just didnt feel as emotional...golden.days verse you had to think more to get the whole picture which is great...he used certain words and put them in certain places so that you knew what was happening but at the same time you had to go a little deeper...and thats what held me into his verse beginning/end-golden.days, the layout he used was great and this is what took the win...the beginning was a good intro it didnt jump right into the verse and the ending had a nice line overall i think golden.days had a better verse but both brought some good shit...no hate good luck to both peace
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01-28-05, 03:29 PM | #27 | |||
'Member Those Golden Days
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IP: 71E7 6664
Sorry man, no KO. Uppin...........................
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01-28-05, 07:34 PM | #28 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
lmao...........................uppin............//
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01-29-05, 12:32 PM | #29 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
uppin............................................. ....
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01-29-05, 01:33 PM | #30 | ||||
GG Haterz
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IP: 8881 8C4F
Voted For: Personify
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