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02-01-05, 10:53 AM | #1 | |||||
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The UnConcious Meets the Concious
IP: AF76 A123
Inhale, pump...pump...pump...exhale.. i shouldn't lay like this, my necks frail.. Blink, your eyes are dry, digest your food.. Be upset, no reason to be in the best of moods.. You need rest my dude..your tired and week.. so much to do, so little time..AHHH I CAN'T SLEEP! you need to shorten your intervals between breathing.. now sweat, upset your stomach and start heaving.. Pump..Pump..Pump, Your heart needs to beat faster.. I'ts the only way you'll outlast this natural disaster.. Now fuck your rhythm up, like a party at your chest.. I'm shuttin this bitch down, this is cardiac arrest.. stop everything, i want all vital signs to go un-noticed.. it's either this or cirrhosis, so you better not blow this.. Pump........pump.................good, thats what I Like to see.. You realize your gonna die, thats why you've given up on me.. don't mean to be selfish, i just wanna get it over with.. and now that we're dead, we needa cross over and shit.. either we go to heaven, or we go back just to meet here again.. it's not really a question, because that dudes body can't win.. "well since it's my decision, I've decided to do this.. you thought selfishly, so this is just to get you pissed.. you manipulated the situation, twisted, and fiddled.. so i think i'll decide to stay right here in the middle.."
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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02-01-05, 01:49 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: B7EB 8905
hot shit u got there............
flow was nice stay on topic all the time i felt that it was one of the hottest i heard so far....hot flow.....keep it up.............
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02-01-05, 06:01 PM | #3 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 8A1A D0A3
fire dawg
keep it up |
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02-02-05, 10:38 AM | #4 | |||||
~SAINT SINNER~
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IP: 683C 4AD9
two words for you, "sindicatecitysown badassmuthafuckin'topicalheadin-vision", lol.
once again......another fire ass drop big vish, word. the flow was smooth as fuck, you used some nice vocabulary, the emotion was there, the descriptive narraration was hot and the structure was on point. this piece was a pretty creative drop (seriously).......and i liked how it built up throughout. your steady improvin' comrad (you havent let me down yet fam). hold it down like only you can........properly. show these rapverse open mic cats how sin city does. keep up the good work crhymie.... BOOST THE MUTHAFUCKIN' CRHYME RATE!!! oner... ...the super...
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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection??? ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE "I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love. |
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02-03-05, 10:35 AM | #5 | |||||
~SAINT SINNER~
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IP: F97E 0508
^^^UPPIN'!!!^^^
...the super.......crhyme sindicate
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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection??? ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE "I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love. |
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02-05-05, 02:04 PM | #6 | |||||
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IP: A9C9 F5B6
uppin this piece......
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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02-22-05, 03:20 AM | #7 | |||||
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IP: AF76 A123
uppin....my creativity is bein slept on
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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