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02-07-05, 01:26 PM | #1 | |||||
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TRUTH BE KNOWN Chorus * Look at all the children..ren..ren Play'n with 1 another...ther...ther look at all their parents...rents...rents Murder'n 1 another...ther...ther Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn.. {So Tell me}..Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn {history repeats itself}....Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn.. {Maybe}...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn {Is cuz history repeats itself}...... Look at all the children..ren..ren...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn Play'n with 1 another...ther...ther...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn ,{Now Take A} look at all their parents.....rents...rents...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn Murder'n 1 another...ther...ther....Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn ======================================== Verse 1* _____________________________________________ Strap in hand he lived his life as a half a man Robbin people with a black bandana made in pakastan he moved errorless, thought he was a smooth terrorist till a sniper helped him "lose his mind".. {BOOM,,there it is} Across the floor ..bet he wont rob no more now you got a sniper on the roof who wont stop the gore as be bursts away, people could'nt run when they heard the bang not that they're "spineless" they just got no more vertabre when ya half whacked, i guess thats 1 way to "blast back" he thought to him self reach'n 4 a clip in his backpack but the script was just not fun, cuz the clip was the wrong one and the last thing he saw was "the light" from the tip of the shot gun & and behind the spark was a young man who's mind was scarred by an inherited hatred dwelling deep inside his heart listen and think as you here this mystery deplete and you'll see life as i see it watch'n hystery repeat {ITSELF} ======================================== Look at all the children..ren..ren Play'n with 1 another...ther...ther look at all their parents...rents...rents Murder'n 1 another...ther...ther Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn.. {So Tell me}..Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn {history repeats itself}....Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn.. {Maybe}...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn {Is cuz history repeats itself}...... Look at all the children..ren..ren...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn Play'n with 1 another...ther...ther...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn ,{Now Take A} look at all their parents.....rents...rents...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn Murder'n 1 another...ther...ther....Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn ======================================== ***************Semi Chorus******************** Pleeeeeeeeeeeeease theres gotta be a way, To save us from this life maybe another place Pleeeeeeeeeeeeease theres gotta be a way, To save us from this life maybe another place ********************************************* _________________________________________ Verse 2* ==Now My Personal Thoughts _________________________________________ open the gates, why you make me hold up and wait flesh corrodes and decays, while you already known my fate in this dome alone i must wait, know'n my soul can exscape threw astral projection but the boundries hold us at stake im just try'n to get a glace of that holy estate cuz here on earth it aint going so great , im grown'n with hate no matter where i go im still exposed to a snake please keep me from these hope steal'n fakes, cloakin their face but you knew this before the world even floated in space so many questions arize but i realize untold they must stay till that horrible day when a war will give way cause'n a glorious place to explode in a rage show'n a global display of fireworks no one exscapes we've read your word you've poken in grace to show us the way but im still hope'n threw praise that those who never truly woken, awake to see you carry most of the weight on our path chosen to take Chorus * Look at all the children..ren..ren Play'n with 1 another...ther...ther look at all their parents...rents...rents Murder'n 1 another...ther...ther Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn.. {So Tell me}..Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn {history repeats itself}....Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn.. {Maybe}...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn {Is cuz history repeats itself}...... Look at all the children..ren..ren...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn Play'n with 1 another...ther...ther...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn ,{Now Take A} look at all their parents.....rents...rents...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn Murder'n 1 another...ther...ther....Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn ********************************************* ALSO EXSCPECT TO HEAR THIS ALL OVER THE WORLD AND EVEN BETTER ...AND BETTER ----AUDIO IS THE BEST WAY ...YALL AINT HEAR NOTHIN YET.... ----------------------------------@nti_/\/\atter the Rekluse--------------------------------------- Last edited by @nti_/\/\atter : 02-07-05 at 10:30 PM. |
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02-08-05, 04:17 PM | #2 | |||||
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02-09-05, 05:01 PM | #3 | |||||
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02-09-05, 06:12 PM | #4 | |||||||
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This is more of an open mic then poetry man...im feelin the emotion buttttt u didnt have to make it like u were singin the shit lol no but it was pretty tight the second verse was hot as fuck especially the openin bar mad propz maybe one day youll be as good as me
it flowed nice...the structure was good and all...the topic was a good choice...multies all the way through lol except u didnt have to underline them..there was alot of emotion flowin through out the whole peice the first verse was good but u really ripped it in the second one |
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02-09-05, 07:07 PM | #5 | |||||
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yeah thanx...with ya weak assed flows..lol.....j/p
one day i will get on ya level hopfully ...peace |
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