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Old 02-17-05, 06:12 PM   #1
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4 Tha DickRidaz (BLACK ft. Buck.Shot)

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[hook]
dont dickride me nigga..i aint ya GOD
im not tha type of nigga dat u can look up to guy
go ya own way..stay up out my face
hate to be mean homie but i got a reason in dis case

(repeat 2x)

[verse 1-BLACK]
nigga, im not a guy dat u can keep real close
not sayin u gay but im gettin mixed feelins at tha most
callin my cell 3 or 4 times a week aint cool dawg
u should let my nuts breathe cuz now im gettin heated dawg
but it aint like im totally disownin you
shit, i remember when i introduced u to tha crew
u was lame as shit
bet u could even get a bitch
and now u lookin for me to be ya backbone when u get dissed by a chick
you like a son to me..a cuzzin or brother, somethin like dat
but stay far away..i'll admit it, sometimes i run away from u jack
and i cant be rude while we in school but GET OFF MY BACK
social time is over my nigga..face tha facts
there is a bunch of cuties in here so go find some cat
i gotta tell u dawg straight up so dont hate me for dis
but friends dont let friends jump on one of da friends dick


(hook 2x)

[verse 2-Buck.Shot]
Niggas got me mistaken for the Lord Himself...
Half these penis ridin marks cant boast shit but RV Wealth
Ya cant Harm-My-Health, I'm already ''Sick''
Now watch these cock-hoppers jock on our Shit
I must be Physic, Just Look At 'Em Hate
But 'Messin with 'Dope' Is 'Illegal' As JailBait..
Check my new 'Inmate' We Got Much Too Debate
Like ''Once You Go ''Black'' You Never Go Back'
Thats why we 'Fire Crackers' an send 'em Packin..
Too many talk hard, but the Talents Lackin
Along with Pussy an Respect
Redbull, Troop, Mimisis an Effect...
I'm comin Live n Direct, Your my number 1 Subject
Its time ta get Wrecked, Ya shook from the Prospect...
Y'all Dont Want Shit From Me, Black Or My Clique
So Get out my face, stay off my case, an go ride each others Dicks!


(hook 2x)

***all comments expressed on dis collab are those of tha emcee rappin them. thank you***

NOW LEAVE SOME MUTHAFUCKIN FEEDBACK. DONT SNORE ON DIS SHIT!!!




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yeah, i love BLACK

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Old 02-17-05, 06:15 PM   #2
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Shit is PHAT AS HELL DOGG!

We Killin it............

Uppin for feed folk!!
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Old 02-17-05, 06:32 PM   #3
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hell yeah...lets fill dis bitch up wit feed yall...c'mon
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Old 02-17-05, 08:39 PM   #4
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Buck.Shot...ur verse stood out ..because tha structure an th aflow of words!!
like tha multis an punches....
best lines-*Along with Pussy an Respect
Redbull, Troop, Mimisis an Effect...
I'm comin Live n Direct, Your my number 1 Subject
Its time ta get Wrecked, Ya shook from the Prospect...*

That was sum personal shit...I like that shit...I hope you get ur response ur lookin 4!!!

as for black...ur verse was okay?...it was aiiight...couldve did better...(like I know ur style,lol!),but u had sum good points so u made up for lack of strong multis an structure with good personals..as *they*say in rap verse...ur best line 2 me---*u was lame as shit
bet u could even get a bitch
and now u lookin for me to be ya backbone when u get dissed by a chick
you like a son to me..a cuzzin or brother, somethin like dat
but stay far away..i'll admit it, sometimes i run away from u jack
and i cant be rude while we in school but GET OFF MY BACK*
...that was personal but without names...hey wouldve been better with a name...ur world BIG Curl!!

my opinion....Sum would kill for it!!...HAH!!!!!
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Old 02-17-05, 09:04 PM   #5
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Black did pretty decent, the words were good, and I could see your message, but it could have been reworded better with more multi's. It was still good though.


Buck had great vocab, with nice multi's, a pretty good flow, and the words stood out and got through to me easily.
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Old 02-17-05, 09:05 PM   #6
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good shit good shit, Buck really added some fire and Black u held it down homie, 8/10.... keep'em comin....
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Old 02-18-05, 07:46 AM   #7
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Aight, aight, thats what i like ta see
Good positive Feedback

Its appreciated from all y'all here man

Uppin for me n my boys masterpeice
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Old 02-18-05, 07:50 AM   #8
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Old 02-18-05, 10:12 AM   #9
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I saw you the first time ^^^

Stop ostin the same thing on my open mics damnit

Uppin for feed
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Old 02-18-05, 10:31 AM   #10
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yeah, thanx 4 tha honest feedback yall. dats whats up. and i'll find out how to get a link up. hold on real quick. MORE FEEDBACK!!!!!!!!
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yeah, i love BLACK

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SO DONE WIT RV
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Old 02-18-05, 10:33 AM   #11
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..........BLACK..........
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Kesse
i wish i was BLACK.......
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tony Green
yeah, i love BLACK

TONY GREEN=My RV Bitch

SO DONE WIT RV
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Old 02-18-05, 04:51 PM   #12
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uppin.....uppin.....uppin
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i wish i was BLACK.......
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yeah, i love BLACK

TONY GREEN=My RV Bitch

SO DONE WIT RV
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Old 02-18-05, 05:55 PM   #13
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uppin.............
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Originally Posted by Kesse
i wish i was BLACK.......
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tony Green
yeah, i love BLACK

TONY GREEN=My RV Bitch

SO DONE WIT RV
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Old 02-19-05, 03:48 PM   #14
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Uppin...........
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Old 02-19-05, 08:25 PM   #15
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Uppin...............
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