this is a fukin depression another rip session on who?...cold steel//
wut a name dude u must think u hot when u r more like a cold meal//
this dude says he didnt pay child support and he banged a mans mom//
i kno already wut this guy story is hes a very sad story gets it from watchin sitcom//
ok so im a nice guy a lil word of advice never suck dick twice//
oh i forgot yall dont kno cold steel did this already once in his life//

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Blow away all ya'll haters like a puff a smoke/
Shove mic's till you choke, like a dick in a throat/
I had a dream and i still have dreams/
So yea we never stopped when they assinated the king/
I get pushed i push back nigga like i was a bed spring/
This rap shit is a road to success and you mc's are the dead thing/

With those lines,I hope you arent tryin ta get paid
I had rhymes just like that!,Yeah!,Back in tha 5th Grade
That shits played,(pause)U throwin bad rice
Talkin bout suckin dick,(pause)but he say's its advice
So I guess if you give it,Then you must've did it
So just admit it!,You like sauage in ur mouth an mustard wit it

Advice comes from experience,Dont it!

stop wit tha gay punchlines...that shit is played out.

Whats with all ur fuckin "Pauses", Why-Trench?
Ur only gunna need 1 moment of Silence
Ur prolly still a Virgin, u've Lost-it-Dude
Ur only chance of havin sex before u die is a Prostitute
So go to ur Piggybank and get ur last £10 Note
And find a Shemale Man to Rock ur Boat

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Whats with all the usless little lines you sat down to write?..
You've shortened the words in ya verse so much it sounds white...
That guy's gona need a lot of shit the way you make him out to sound...
Take heed to my shit cos I ain't clownin around, I set out to astound...
That means to leave you in a haze all dazed and confused with the way I spit...
I could proof read ya shit 5 times and all i'd still see infront of me is a pile of grit...
Or should I say shit, as produced throught the fingertips of the clown Ecko-D...
With the help of his mind and his mouth layed to the mat for the 1-2-3...

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I couldn't resist any longer (Thanks for the feedback lol)

he asks who you know fresher than hov
nigga wut up wit you how fresh r u concerning yo flow
from wut i just seen it was average n i gave you that
so how come u clame to be so hot wit the grit line riddle yourself that
that last punch was weak ass hell can u even count to 3
well maybe u can but then why cudnt u make it out past 1st grade easily

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First post ,Okay...Imma give you your First-Beating
Can you please make a verse that is Worth-Reading
Im not tryna delcare Beef-On-you
Why you dissing riddlemethat? It's Obvious you get "SleepedOn2"//
I hit with the MOst-Presizion, my rhymes are unfake
unlike MOst-ur-Writtens!!

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http://www.soundclick.com/yungfranchize

Me(Young Franchize) and Phenom are puttin' together an E.P for ya'll make sure you check that out...Out Soon

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U suck so hard u tell-us u'll make his balls blue?
I bet even Girls are Jealous of You
U should Make like ur Video of MTV Jams
And walk away before I turn Abnormal and get Bloody-Hands
Dont bother postin again id rather hear Less-of-it
and 1 word of advice, Never underestimate

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Ackrite go take ur Face for a Full-Shit
Ugly Ass Face and all u talk is Bull-Shit
Dont attempt audio u'll prolly sound like Britney-Spears
Ull get Shown-up u look like a model Queer that just Frown-up and got fucked in the Rear
Ur a gangster? U probly a rich Model in real Life
Got a set marriage soon u'll be a Wife
So stop actin and take the Dread-Locks out-ur Hair-Do
Or ill give u a reason to say The Dead-stalked n Scared-You

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ya soft and quiet, its hard to hear d eckos
i rip this kid right from the spleen to shelltoes
ya mics special made for no talent ass clowns
see me in an alley you aint got the time to back down
and i dont shoot piece, i murder wit words
wit fervor at herbs, thats ill?, the whole verse was absurd!

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THIS RIGHT HERE HAS BEEN CERTIFIED FOR YEARS......BONAFIDE

why you up in here i own this sectore
i see you name i but im the hanbal lectore
i one verse ill eat you up, chump
you'll be gon till the next time i take a dump
see my only rule is ill go intensce or i'll be like you
and in one punch only the kid from sixth scenths will be seeing you
see i make emcee decease as i feast
on what they got for skill at least release the lryical beast
i call big e the king of the east.

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what you think you doing why you testing G
i got lyrical genius just infecting me
see im invincible. my style unconvincible
either your me and u spiting it or you incenifigant
see im on top the game Like 50 cent
cause Gay-unit all got there genders bent

reason for edit: the centre was in rightin and wasn't centerd

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your style is unmatched, or more like not hatched
i mean its a simple fact.. recs 1-4..ure more then a quarter wack
sportin that..!!!, holy crap get ya head on straight
cuz ill grill ya cheesy text, so for once you can be grate
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not worth 6

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!