that shit was dope, was a nice long write... mentioned ya might get a deal, thats hot... i need a collab so be sure to hit me up any time for one... i liked the imagery and the consistant flow. you used an extensive decent and low key vocaubulary, the list goes on, you have great imagination, fiction or non fiction the story was felt, i invisioned this being audio'ed... you should see whats up with that, grab a hook and some heads... jot down a chorus and box it. record a track or two.. have it real southern, cause the west got to ill to be underground with, your fire though, like i said.... get at me for a collab, i got some topics just marinating. word.

nicely done, pc.

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damn...good lookin on the feedback eph....if i ever get enough time ill make this audio.....and yea im down to collab whenever, just pm me with a topic

good look son the feedback tho

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good approach, i enjoyed it... should have let eph shout a verse though.

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shit...get on a remix eph

and i was bein sarcastic about the deal shit, cuz thats what newbs always be sayin.......but if i ever did try serious and get a deal id make sure to shout out peoples that deserve shoutouts

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