that shit was dope, was a nice long write... mentioned ya might get a deal, thats hot... i need a collab so be sure to hit me up any time for one... i liked the imagery and the consistant flow. you used an extensive decent and low key vocaubulary, the list goes on, you have great imagination, fiction or non fiction the story was felt, i invisioned this being audio'ed... you should see whats up with that, grab a hook and some heads... jot down a chorus and box it. record a track or two.. have it real southern, cause the west got to ill to be underground with, your fire though, like i said.... get at me for a collab, i got some topics just marinating. word.

nicely done, pc.

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quote your own damn lyrics...