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Old 03-10-05, 08:41 PM   #1
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Old 03-10-05, 08:51 PM   #2
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aight... this was pretty dope...... aight this is what i think

first off id say make the beat slightly louder... and make the song a little longer... shit was dope.... i was feelin both verses... Trip had the best lyrics and 20 had the best flow... all in all shit was dopeness fa sho...
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Old 03-10-05, 09:37 PM   #3
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yo this was pretty nice track.

20 Grand, nice verse. Yo lyrics were ok, flow was pretty nice. Overall pretty good shit from you, quality was a lil eh.

Triple, good job on hook, and yo verse was str8t fiya nigga. Funny ass adlibs too "Nigga what!??" and that shit. lol nice shit there. flow was on point too. You made this track nigga.

but overall, I liked this. both of y'all came good. tight job. 8/10 pc niggas. NY FOR LIFE, SMOKE THAT WEED FROM YOUR PIPE!! peace..
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Old 03-11-05, 02:42 AM   #4
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shit was solid.......straight dope....

both ur verses fitted to the beat...altho i didntlike the beat..
20 G came good and his flow wa good, on beat and you owned the beat...you quality was decent. triple N as always almost flawless, lyrics were a bit simple and shit bu other than that its hard to find fault with you drop...hook was quite catchy..shit was a bit short tho

keep em coming..was nice
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Old 03-11-05, 04:46 AM   #5
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I think Trip dun flipped this jam. He killed it. 20's flow wasn't that bad, but Trip you rode that shit HARD. Flawless flow, and gettin better every drop yo. And them adlibs were straight nucca man. LOL. that was funny. Should get Phenom on that third verse yo I was feelin that beat. nice drop. 1
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Old 03-11-05, 06:00 AM   #6
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werd. shits pretty dope. not my style of rap but ya both suit it and didnt dissapoint to deliver. trip you got a dope voice bro. both ya flows was good. i still think most of the songs on rv are generic BUT its alright can't deny your skills....soooo yeh keep it up.
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Old 03-11-05, 06:19 AM   #7
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well overall this is ok 20 grand ya voice is horrible ya flow is ok lyrics is mega weak here on your part hook is grabage as shit here just wack triple verse is pretty good flow wise lyrics is weak also especially for trip beat is kinda commercial i dont think yall used it right here though
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Old 03-11-05, 07:04 AM   #8
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I guess it would be easy to have a flawless flow when it's BASIC.

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Old 03-11-05, 10:43 AM   #9
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I never realized how much you and spul look alike. lol. Thanks for the cranker comment - thats mad dope. Even though I'm native you dumbass.
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Old 03-11-05, 11:08 AM   #10
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20 grand i think all ur stuff sonds similar but it was pretty good no doubt props flow was good
triple flow was really good love ur voice the hook was ok i guess lol couldve bbeen better i think
beat was ok nothing really special
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Old 03-11-05, 01:48 PM   #11
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ok....i'm really feeling this track....the beats ok.....i mean....its kinda old..so its kinda played....but i'm thinkin Triple N came harder and his ish was pretty damn hot....the hook was nice...pretty damn catchy....Triple ya flow was also catchy as hell....20 grand...you did a nice job also...the style you had on this song was pretty cool...overall 8/10
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Old 03-11-05, 02:22 PM   #12
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Yo like the beat, The quality sounds good even in Lo.. But i think yah got yah lyrics up to high, need to even that shit.. But the lyrics are dope, and yah ride the beat nice.. the second verse.. is straight dope.. Good shit bro..Oh yah chours could use some more different effects, sounds very similar to yah verses...
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Old 03-12-05, 11:20 AM   #13
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The beats okay.. the quality in the chorus is okay.. 20, your verse was pretty good.. nice multi's.. 20, your delivery is okay.. i've heard alot better from you man.. but yo triple_N.. very nice verse yo.. Hella nice ass multi's.. hella surprised me.. well nice song yo.. it's basiclly better then most of the audio heads up in here...

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Old 03-12-05, 11:31 AM   #14
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jea im just tryna get feed, cuz i am re-spiting my verse
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