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03-08-05, 03:25 PM
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Foul Addiction
IP: 8155 9B30
(eph) i imagine the day im too young for social security. yet too old to function, bipassing my third surgery. rockin burgandy turtle necks & burberry air nikes. cause i love the rap culture, like diddy loves ice. (Kesse) as i look back at my past, and the choices i was making doing things i never thought possible, my sanity was breaking to impress my friends and family, is all i ever wanted my conscious clouded as their expectations always haunted hanging with the wrong people, really changed my life never could go outta my house without a gun or a knife you do certain things, not realizing they're crimes you commit thats the first signs of an addiction, you dont want to admit when you look out only for yourself, unaware you cause harm to others my family was broken, leaving i forced suicide onto two of my brothers i didn't know any better, i was willing to go to any length youth is ignorance, so foolish, i thought i had the strength everything is falling apart, this is not how i envisioned but its too late now, no turning back, ive made my decision and as i continued along, with that one sole intent for success you realize you need certain skills that you just dont possess but it didnt matter, i would do anything necessary, go to any extent i would fullfill my dreams, and too often i was found asleep on cement finally i woke up, and it was all too clear my life had faded this miserable path i chose had left me bitter and jaded and as i stood there in an empty park, broken, poor and lost i know now that every decision made always has consequential costs but these lessons dont come easy, neither the right place or time if i had this knowledge before, my whole life probly woulda been fine and as i held up that store clerk, you can already guess the prediction i lay bloody on the floor, dead... as a result of a foul addiction (eph) and now im just a memory, lost to 2004. hope my name is voiced, from euro to american shores. the older i got, i felt more cornered by questions. & pledged to excel as death moves closer by seconds. been taught lessons since i bought my first wessons. wonder of angels & heavens, wanting whats above... praying for love & that god will forgive my transgressions. most of the wise are conservative, i was born liberal. had a higher gpa than bush & dont consider life political. saying nations dont starve is like saying BK is digital. thats why i have an addiction... and my vision will inspire underground rap, i miss grand master flash. the spirit that echoes kanye, and backs the aftermath. who produced more music groups than interscope. the real mixtape magician...bitter sweet & bitter dope. well off or broke, i miss so many faces that progessed. furthered the art & were murdered, still no arrests. pac gunned down, and was left with more led to the chest than maimi pd's kevlar vests....saviors of the projects. had minor differences, most stood with a unity. with voices loud enough to lift poverty from communities. removed the burden of racism, left standards to uphold. so how does a discolsed murder with witnesses unfold? a story untold...heard rumors & all about the fiction. its why life goes on its foul addiction... ... a world of untouched souls.
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03-08-05, 03:39 PM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
hummina....hummina.....haha, your verse was kickin' eph
 "the older i got, i felt more cornered by questions. & pledge to excel as death moves closer by seconds" ^ fav line, lots-o-other good ones too......beauty piece..........lets get some feed http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2010869
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this world is a drug, and everyone's selfish FLY FREE Last edited by Kesse : 03-08-05 at 05:31 PM. |
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03-08-05, 05:07 PM
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As Seen On T.V.
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IP: 5867 FD83
either me or kesse will drop the link. dont worry.
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03-08-05, 06:40 PM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
up/................
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03-08-05, 09:00 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 997D A94C
that was very dope
kesse whoah you came very tight lots of elevation i see the imagery was incredible the stucture was super ill and the vocab was decent i flet your half was very godly and done well maybe i will have to battle you soon topically ill win but your super ill man lots of elevation too eph damn that was ill stucture was great vocab was flawless and the imagery was just tony the tiger great the creativty was so dope i loved your part it was just great, and a good chorus, keep doin ya thang rtf in my OM once Upon A Time PLEASE!!!!! links in da sig |
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03-08-05, 09:09 PM
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
^ yeah, this was very tight....good work bro
i think parallel said it all for me...........and eph.......intelligent, amazing, and beautiful, keep it up, both of youRed Bull out |
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03-09-05, 12:36 AM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
up..............
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03-09-05, 01:23 PM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
up it..........
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this world is a drug, and everyone's selfish FLY FREE |
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03-09-05, 09:05 PM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
up.............
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this world is a drug, and everyone's selfish FLY FREE |
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03-09-05, 10:56 PM
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Tha Truth
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IP: 0825 899A
Good shit yall good structure good flow good wordplay good vocabulary all around good verses.......i give it a 8.5/10.......Pz RTF link in my sig
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03-10-05, 12:16 AM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
word, mo feed..
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03-10-05, 03:57 PM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
boring....................
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03-11-05, 01:29 AM
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in your system
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IP: 7C6D 1B8D
gahhhh.........
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03-11-05, 02:51 PM
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Tight.
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IP: 1768 36E3
Seriously a tight dropped by both, imagery was there. Your concept develepment could've been worked a little but otherwise it was good. Vocab was there, remember vocabulary doesn't always have to be big, but effective, which is what you both did quite well on. Both of your structures played to your advantage and great flow was produced. Props to both of you for dropping dope.
Dont' forget to leave feedback, on other pieces. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181308 |
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03-11-05, 02:53 PM
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
^done..........
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