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Kesse 5 100.00%
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Old 03-17-05, 05:17 PM   #1
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Old 03-17-05, 08:56 PM   #2
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Old 03-17-05, 09:37 PM   #3
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Old 03-18-05, 02:48 AM   #4
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Old 03-18-05, 05:24 AM   #5
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Voted For: Kesse

o nice shit again kesse i lyke da structure in diz battle it wuz tight mayne eazy ta read an yo punches wuz sick in diz battle u had da much better verse thiz iz like a non contest yo

this guy rapping, hah, thats like singing to a sick canary
because you're an unknow on RV, even to the dictionary
shit, with a name like SCIP, i know you must be messed inside
and the only way you 'killin herbs', if you covered in pesticide
you winning this battle, but looking to the sky, sorry, i see no pigs
wanna know your outcome in this battle, just take a look at your sig
i'll close this up, leaving you violated, like the guy in your avatar
been here twice as long as me, but skill, your not even half as far

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I'm One Step Beyond This Kid like I Scipped Steps, Cuz I Ripped-Headz like Bitches Biting off Penis' in Dick-Sex

This Kid Aint Close to Picture-Perfect once Scip Rips-His-Frame, cuz K can see just ask him hes random out the hat like Tricks-His-Game

The Way I hit K's Face he does Chin-Plants, cuz the only time this kid can hold his Ches high is when he has Im-Plants

quick if you dont get it dont vote

Picture Perfect and One Step Beyond r personals the rest is wordplay you should get it

what mo' can i say??????
kesse winz by ah landslide
 
Old 03-18-05, 12:21 PM   #6
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Old 03-18-05, 04:00 PM   #7
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Old 03-18-05, 08:20 PM   #8
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Old 03-18-05, 09:49 PM   #9
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Voted For: Kesse

this was a easy battle

kesse- your verse wasnt all that amazing but i thought it did the job. you had some average wordplay.. and average punches.. nothing really stood out to me... but then again it was not a bad drop... it just looks like you didn't even try on this one... ha alright wordplay and punches though

scip- ok you need some work.. first of all your structure is off. your wordplay is a little eh. i thought that your punches didn't hit hard enough and that you really need to up your game... you had some potential though .... ok overall a below average drop

Vote..//Kesse. mainly because his verse was more organized and it hit harder ...because of better punches and personals...
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Old 03-19-05, 01:25 AM   #10
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Old 03-19-05, 02:16 PM   #11
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Old 03-19-05, 02:29 PM   #12
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not a difficult choi e really, kesse came off a lot better on all counts.

Open: Kesse was good, nice metaphor in a hard hitting punch. SCIP's was ok but played and not on the level of Kesse.

Closer: Kesse was good again wiv good personal use for the punch that pulled off good. SCIP's wasnt as good, i wasnt feelin the punch really, nice metaphor in the last line but the set up was wack.

Overall: Kesse had a nice verse with good personal punches wiv good uses of metaphors. Good goings, keep up.

SCIP: Your verse was good but below his level. Wat let you down was the flow and structure of the whole thing mostly. But only time will help you on that. Your punches were good but overall Kesse is another standard to you and it showed. But you got the potential. Good luck with all.
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