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Old 04-10-05, 04:24 PM   #1
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pretty good song, but lots of stuff to work on...you have some talent...but fell off the beat alot. and you kinda rap like they a baby talks. saying stuff like wif...instead of with...its not a big deal and you probably do it on purpose...but i liked the singing...doubles were a little off...but this showed some potential...GOOD SHIT...well done, keep dropping
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Old 04-10-05, 06:11 PM   #2
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thanx man... now i know what to improve on yo... yeah my next song will definately be alot better..
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Old 04-10-05, 11:12 PM   #3
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this was nice and shit i like this word versees were ok but i really like the singging...do yo thang ....RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=185169
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Old 04-11-05, 11:15 PM   #4
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what kind of feedback is that man?
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Old 05-07-05, 03:45 PM   #5
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uppin for old times sake......
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Old 05-07-05, 11:45 PM   #6
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Really feelin this shit...Nice mix, voice, flow, lyrics are sexy...lol...Good shit man...U did a good job rapping over a beat with no drums in it...lol...Good shit fam!
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Old 03-13-05, 04:49 PM   #7
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yeh... i think its dope.. u want me 2 do tht mixtape cover still i got time to do it now...

haha yea sure man..thanx

and thanx speats.. appreciate it alot
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