i win battles like you never of expected
i accepted and came out wit a direct hit
every battle's reflected cuz i checked it
i get more votes in here and i collect it
scared of me but i'm the one u selected
i spray that teck9 shit, break necks shit
check my next shit cuz shit gets hectic
bitch u dont even come close 2 my skill
as i move in 4 a kill a dream i must fulfill
every time i give ur ass a hyped up thrill
ur shit just tires people like a sleepin pill
i spred out fakes like they peanut butter
ur heart beating cuz of me and u stutter
as i watch your lips spill shit like a gutter
i just write lines on paper till they clutter
i rehearse them, reread them as i mutter

i'm fulfillin my dream
fallin for no scheme
making fans scream
as if i'm ice creeem

at school i'm always spendin time in the office
cuz all their students were leaving in all coffins
actin hard till i'm there and every hata softens
i choke 'em till their throat needs a cough mint
just simple shit like that happens quite often
fuck carrying blades i just fuckin toss grenades
all these damn homos fuckin love to share AIDS
in disgust never trust any guy that likes ur nuts
kill any guy that checks out buts n' spill his guts
if u do that, it'll be a plus among everyone of us
light up blunts, pull off stunts with all girls cunts
and for once get rid of all these god damn runts
sooo just go home and just leave this one alone
as i go write my own cuz i'm sick of gettin blown
i should get on audio so i cann showw this tone
i'mhard as stone, c how my skill level has grown

i'm fulfillin my dream
fallin for no scheme
making fans scream
as if i'm ice creeem

it was iight you could of came harder nice structure and nice vocab hook was iight could of been better. Tony Green gives it a 7/10

btw repay favor plz links in sig!

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tony summed to all up...7.5/10 from me...return tha fava...link in sig

-DB

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uppin this........

ok this is real feed...not from people in your crew who are gonna say its good whether it is or not......

i can honestly see that you are elevating yourself....you structure is completely on point...flow was decent...lyrics werent so great...but better than when you started off...when you first came to this site...i could say none of that...youve actually already elevated yourself past a few of your crew members...and became better than them because you have focused on elevating...instead of tryin to start shit all the time...but overall it was decent...i give you a 5/10

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yp honestly thanx for the feed it's feed like that i really love hearing and knowin that i elevated from someone else's view as well as for my own honestly even though i'm in NOK and NOK has beef with TE, your alrite i especially love hearing good feed from member outside of the fam so i could see that i'm also gettin other fans outside of my fam....uppin more on this and uppin on peeps outside of the fam as well as in the fam