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**GHOSTE** | 0 | 0% | |
Cinema | 5 | 100.00% | |
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll |
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03-15-05, 06:42 PM | #16 |
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
Voted For: Cinema
Cinema Nice Lines, I Thought You Had A Nice Opener Man, Vocabulary Was Flawless, Nice Punches Man, The Personals Oh Hell Now, Got Em' Coz, Wordplay Alright Didn't Dig It Much, But Meta's Whoa! Yo Coz You Nice, Punches And Personals Got You This Battle Though, Your Opener Was Mad Nice, But Your Closer Was Nicer, Try Working On Structure Though Man Weerd Ghoste Alright Verse Man You Vocabulary Wasn't To Good, Your Punches Was Pretty Decent Bruh, Structure Erm, Try And Change It up Man And Don't Use The "//" It Makes Your Verse Look SLoppy, Just Line Up The Bars Man, Personals Na I Wasn't Feeling Em, Overall I Think You Need To Elevate On Your Flow A Little Man Vote-Cinema Return The Favor With An Honest Vote Links Are In My Sig Peace |
03-15-05, 09:43 PM | #17 |
Lyrics + Crunk = GHOSTE
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IP: 5A37 DD02
bump.............................................. ............
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03-15-05, 09:56 PM | #18 |
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more votes people by the way all votes will be returned honest
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03-16-05, 06:41 PM | #19 |
Lyrics + Crunk = GHOSTE
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IP: 5A37 DD02
bump.............................................. .....
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03-18-05, 11:23 PM | #20 |
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IP: 4C83 DF2E
can some more people vote in this battle please all votes will be returned
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03-19-05, 04:30 AM | #21 |
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Voted For: Cinema
umm you win becuase you had better lines and you didnt self glorify ghoste, you came real wack and your approach was kinda wack, you need to be moe creative, but also come with your best everytime, dont tak eit easy becuase hes a newb, just try your best and elevate, thastr all i can say, but yo, good battle cinema, your shit was decent but your lines whyere kinda wack, but there where 2 good lines, and that was the KMART line, that shit was mad creative, and your last line, those 2 lines where better than his whole verse, good shit but you also need to elevate vote=cinema RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=180980 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=180235 |
03-19-05, 12:15 PM | #22 |
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IP: 10E1 4D65
can some more people vote i need two more votes and i'll voteon yours
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03-20-05, 01:38 AM | #23 |
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IP: 5A56 B73A
can some more peopel vote so i can get a win off of this guy
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03-20-05, 11:11 PM | #24 | |
The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Cinema
**GHOSTE**: cinema?...just a punk...watch him respect me when i beat him/ i could nuke yo ass, and still wouldnt see 'FIRE IN THA THEATER'*/ ^^dope meta decent punch 7/10 wanna hte me cause i bang?...cause im white and i talk slang?/ well i dont need a set to see the fact taht this dudes raps is lame/ ^^this is wack, no solid punch, no meta nothing 2/10 wants to go cryin to his crew(*2), about how ima smoke dis dude/ u mite aswell be a 'crip' too the way ill leave u black and 'blue'/ ^^crip/black and blue lines are played, decent personal 5/10 Overall: 14/30 (47%) Cinema: Generally i wouldn't battle herbs..but today i feel like a drug fiene He's a G.............but he's tha only 1 in his set like a pair of jeans ^^decent opener kinda, good meta though 6/10 Often dresses as a 'crip'..gets all his gear off the 'blue light special' Sure you're face is next to the cemen(t)..like the cum you slept next to ^^decent meta wack punch cum lines are played 4/10 Tends to be on a sight all day and night..i thaught real crips had lives Even i would be 3-0....if i battled bumbs and beat the same person twice ^^decent personal, 5/10 Overall: 15/30 (50%) Vote: Cinema Ghoste that black and blue line killed your verse and stopped the momentum
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03-22-05, 01:11 PM | #25 |
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can somre more people vote 1 more vote for the win
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03-22-05, 10:32 PM | #26 |
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IP: D890 FA2C
can i have a couple more honest votes one more should do
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03-22-05, 10:43 PM | #27 |
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IP: C2DF 7A85
Voted For: Cinema
oh dear, this was a shame for Ghoste cos i could see the potential but the punches wasnt connecting good. opener was really weak from Ghoste, the rhyme wasnt good and the punch didnt hit hard. I think the metaphor needs to be more in touch with wat your writing. Cinema had a nice opener. hit nicely and good metaphor. Second bar was much the same. I wasnt feeling Ghoste's contribution here. The rhyme didnt even pull off well. Cinema's was nice punch that i enjoyed. Closer was good from Ghoste. By far your best bar. Cinema's was ok too and had a nice personal but ghoste's close may have been a little better. Overall Cinema by a long shot. If ghoste had the quality of the closer in the rest it mite av done well |
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