i did dis song in audio but here we go

TALKING
YO, FIRST OFF I GOT 1 THING TO SAY, AND THATS I AINT DISSIN NOBODY FROM COMPTON, BUT GAME IZ MAKIN DA CITY LOOK BITCH-MADE WHICH THEY AINT


VERSE 1
GANGSTA GANGSTA, LOOK WHOS BACK FROM NEW YORK
MISTA COMPTON, ALMOST SEEN YA LIFE SLIP AWAY ON IV SUPPORT
SEE IM FROM DA 'WOOD BUT I'LL STILL COME TO DA C
CUZ THE WAY U BEEN TALKIN, DA WEST DONT DESCRIBE ME
IM FROM WERE THEY HANG EVERYDAY AND BANG OUT
IN DA CUT TO MARLET, BLAST THEM D.E.'S OUT
HOW U GONE CLAIM COMPTON WHEN U SPENT YA LIFE IN CARSON SON
I SEEN YA DVD'S, FAKE ASS SET-UP'S WIT PLASTIC GUNS
NIGGAZ SHOW U LOVE CUZ THEY THINK U GOT HEAT
BUT WEN BEEF POP'S OFF, MA MAGNUM SPEAKS
U WAS RAISED ON A CRIP BLOCK, SANTANA BRING U DRAMA
I DONT BANG BUT I GOT SLUGS THAT'LL EAT U ALIVE LIKE J. DAUHMER
YA MOM,DAD, AND BROTHER IZ CRIP'S, R U SLOW IN DA HEAD
I BET YA FAMILY REUNIONS RESLULT IN GRANDMA GETTIN SHOT IN DA LEG
I'LL ERASE YA CAREER LIKE CAV'S AND CREST
AND U DONT REP MA LIFESTYLE SO DONT SAY U BRIGGIN BAC DA WEST

TALKING
DATS IT, IF U WANNA KEEP DIS SHIT ON WAX THEN THATS KOO WIT ME CUZ ITS LYRICAL WAR HOMIE, SAVE YA BREATHE

Uppin Dis Shit Yall

Shit was cool nice cool nice flow good structure nice vocab it was a nice piece it could of been a lil better and longer but was good 8/10

btw repay the favor links insig!

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Tony Green's Soundclick

Thnx, Uppin Dis Shit

Chea fo sho a def nice Piece


Maybe we should collab Sometimes .......


trust me if you knew who ive did some collabs wit youd be like damn ,......But n e way that in the past .....

nice piece I Like to read songs

Thnx, Maybe Sumtime

Uppin Dis Shit

yeah its coo...structure was off at times but blah...it was iigh fam...stay up...pz

-DB

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