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IP: 1111 4B17
nice shit bro. in one word - enthralling. haha. it doesnt work how u wrote 'an' instead of 'a' tho in places. (Like an cloud, It was an hawk, took out an pencil) u only write 'an' if the first letter of the next word is a vowel. other than that this was a good read. keep em coming. tight.
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
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IP: 0947 A79D
Uppin For This Shit.............................chea
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IP: 0DA5 D7BF
this was a good piece...i was feelin tha dream part cause you made it seem more vivid...almost like you could envision what you was sayin...i give ya a 8/10..could have been more elaborate on tha sleep part...but still a good poem...keep writein man
...holla at ya gurl
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IP: D981 8C7C
O Thanx Ma Appreciate The Feedback.............chea Uppin I'll Return Fav'z
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IP: D981 8C7C
Cheaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Upppin
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 3508 3A5F
this was good for poetry which i really dont like lol but i liked this emotion was straight
y does everyone make their poetr on here flow grrrrr lol make a haiku i like those plain and simple lol
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IP: 5C0F C541
Uppin For More Feedbacks....................shit I Got The Most Feedbacks Hehehe Werd
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IP: 6F1B DF6B
Uppin For Feedback Uppin For Feedback Werd...........
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IP: 4BD0 87AE
damn nice drop man nice drop it was hot liked it felt the flow all the way through it nice Keep it up man 9/10
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IP: 3240 794D
O Aight Thanks Fam.............................uppin For More Feedbacks Chea
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IP: 28AD 5545
^^^poem Of The Month^^^^ .............uppin
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