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04-04-05, 04:12 PM
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As Seen On T.V.
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not bad. should have extended it a little more. but not bad. pc
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04-04-05, 04:17 PM
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right You know how hard it is to write stuff like that?
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04-04-05, 04:31 PM
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in your system
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i liked it, except for when you said nerdy geeks......haha, keep up
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04-04-05, 04:41 PM
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she likes it when I say stuff that make her laugh but yeah uppin.
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04-04-05, 08:33 PM
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uppin this shit.
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04-04-05, 11:22 PM
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[i]This was an okay drop, Could have been better..
Stucture was alittle off but,still readable... You had lots of feeling and nice emotions.. This was a good read, next time just elevate on your structure and you'll be good , overall keep it up
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04-05-05, 09:29 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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You and Katrina have the same style of writing............... odd...
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04-06-05, 06:55 PM
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#8
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what you mean. I help her out. heh so don't get any ideas about her being imaginary.
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04-07-05, 02:39 AM
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uppin this shit....
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04-07-05, 05:54 PM
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uppin this shit.
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04-07-05, 08:09 PM
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your girls verse was blah yo, yours was alright, I dont like love songs though, soooo corny, but anyways, it was good, nice meta's, lined were a little stretched, but overall it was decent, not bad, good stuff, 7/10
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04-07-05, 08:33 PM
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ready 4 wuteva
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nice drop...here's wut stood out to me
-the flow was decent enough...it fell off in areas but nobody's perfect -there wasnt much raw emotion but everything that was said made sense -the hook was fire...use that in a audio or somethin -"Like a nerdy geeks grades my love for you is progressin": not a good comparrison to be honest....try somethin like " emotions take over when i see you i cant control my affection"...yet again it did make sense tho. overall i give this one a 6/10 keep droppin and RTF in my OM called Dream or reality.1.
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04-10-05, 05:47 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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04-10-05, 08:40 PM
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Light Weight
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I liked this.. alot actually. Legand ASL!? PM me iight...
late sweft
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04-10-05, 09:06 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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legend this was a solid drop fam, real emotion, you can tell
this meant something to you, similies were koo n ya flow was on key for the most part.....definately a good piece fam...stay up...
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