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Old 03-29-05, 05:23 PM   #1
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"Loneliest Number" Feat. JDot

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...one is the loneliest number...
...that you'll ever do...
...two can be as bad as one...
...its the loneliest number...
...since the number one...

OneStepBeyond

i was young and i was dumb... thats why its hurtin for me,
to explain that, you bein my main bitch wasn't workin for me,
first things first, worse things were that it hurt me to see,
you thought that you fucked up and you wasn't worthy of me,
truth be told.. im stupid yo... left you with a broken heart,
couldn't finish so why i get into shit i didn't hope to start,
im broke apart... the fact i want you back, made a mistake,
and won't take me cause i chose the choice i was crazy to make,
said i wanted you and you said "baby its late" one more chance,
quit talkin to this one chick cuase of ya, hope she understands,
im not the type to go around and try and get a bunch of ass,
if you came back to me you'd be a princess.. and trust in that,
sorry bout the other day, saw you with a dude and must attack,
i just feel we got love... but the maturity is what we lack,
and don't called me obsessed cause we both.. well.. um.. attached,
but i can't live without you, and trust i won't be playin you,
one is the loneliest.... i guess what they say is true...

JDOT

Mami knew what she had, roll with a stuntin nigga like me
Make them other girls jealous was her moto...big bottles
of grey goose, we would sip em on down
Had a good time, chill, fuck around and clown
I took her in as my down ass chick...
bought her gowns and shit, in the town with whips we would roll
Never once thought of leavin her in the cold...
I'm bold, enough to admit my wrongs, and split my folds
I made my bad choices, late nights had different voices up in my bed
Got cocky, it went straight to my head
Got away with cheating? no I was beating myself, didn't know I was feeding tha dead
So now I'm stuck
What tha fuck I'm posed to do without my girl on my side
Admit I, fucked up, now I'm riding alone, why?
Could I be blind, my mack shit failed this time...
She wasn't tripping that I rhymed, she wanted me to be real

...one is the loneliest number...
...that you'll ever do...
...two can be as bad as one...
...its the loneliest number...
...since the number one...

JDOT

Was being real too much to ask for?
That's what I was getting ass for. Now I'ma asshole with none
And I had a good girl, that loved me for me
Not my money or my fame, now our shit is done
I was fucking wit other bitches, I deserved what I got
Got caught , ended the shit before it really begun
Hope you dont think this for fun, one is a lonely number
And I witnessed it already, glad when I was young

OneStepBeyond

fall sleep and wake up thinkin of you, shit i dream about you,
loneliest number is one, but the loneliest thing is me without you,
can you look past all the bullshit,more than once, repeatedly,
like you did when the first time you decided to be with me,
look past all the drugs and alcohol that i quit for a chance,
to be with you me, not for a chance just to get in your pants,
but i'll understand if you don't... but don't be that cold,
you know i won't blame you though cause i am an asshole...

chyeah... Onestep.... Jdot...
how you like that? on some..
motha fuckin old school shit!
haha... and we out...



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Old 03-29-05, 08:10 PM   #2
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uppin for fuck sake
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Old 03-29-05, 08:15 PM   #3
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A'ight...this was pretty good from both...decent vocab, decent flow...structure is off for both...keep that shit more straight. Somethin I can sorta relate to...all 3 of us should collab on somethin like this. PM me. Keep it up.
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Old 03-29-05, 10:19 PM   #4
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once ahain another OSB hit lol...i like this man good vocab, nice flow and structure...hitness from the E.F.chyeah 9/10
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Old 03-29-05, 10:38 PM   #5
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yeah man...dis is anotha one...structure was off a lil but its still good...im feelin it...maybe all of tha ol NOK can collab.................................dat was random, lmao...but yeah, 8/10 mos def...yall stay up!

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Old 03-29-05, 11:17 PM   #6
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This was nice, i was really feeling it ...
Structure was alittle off... need to work on that...
Both had nice vocab...Decent flow...
Overall this was a nice drop..NOK has some pretty decent text dropp's but i thought NOK went all Audio?...enyways nice drop..keep it up both just work on structure
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Old 03-29-05, 11:28 PM   #7
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lol i like the 9/10s and 8/10s considering i didn't even try
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Old 03-29-05, 11:29 PM   #8
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and this wasn't NOK homie.... just a collab...
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Old 03-30-05, 01:30 PM   #9
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uppin...........
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Old 03-30-05, 02:03 PM   #10
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ay...return tha fava...link in sig

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Old 03-30-05, 11:22 PM   #11
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u-p-p-i-n-g.... homie
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Old 03-31-05, 01:24 PM   #12
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Old 04-01-05, 11:47 AM   #13
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uppin..........
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Old 04-01-05, 11:54 AM   #14
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The concept is nice...
OSB - good emotion seemed like you didnt try much on this..but iot was nice

JDOT - also nice...you came totally different from OSB concept this was nice


Both came nice
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Old 04-17-05, 04:24 PM   #15
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uppin....my first time seeing this shit...lmao
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