why da fuck u think there aint no test'in ya
heres ya 1st lesson dog.....
how easy it Is, to get u hang.... like my car-air-freshn'a

nah it aint the boys... its the mercury tracer... chach'in ya
with a nigga buck'in shots... til sheels lift ya chest like trainning-bras

my flow restrain-ya............
no rape, only lead u got is to a train-u-saw....

u hard-rocks like horney bitches... cuz i'll BANG-ya SOFT
here my full train of thoughts....
ya volcals wouldnt get herd even if u was dispatcher


i dont know im just bored with no new beats :*(

The Industry already got 50 cent.. Your shit out of luck.. Sorry, An we all know you ant busting no guns.. Dont worry as you grow older you find your place in this world.. So i suggest for you to maybe take up Male Gymnastics.. cause yah rap sucks..

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fuck you

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This was a really weak peice...
You need to elevate alot more , on how to make bars
not just little lines ,
You need to learn how to put feeling in your written , and
Make punchlines and learn to use creative wordplay, and vocab
overall this was weak and you just need to elevate

Psrop a link to an OM' you have left feedback on or this will be closed

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mmm not very good but had some vocab so not bad,could be a lilbit longuer too,but meh who cares more fun to read lol,structure is NO WAY GOOD lol,flow is cool ,good flow lol,anyway leave links of the open mics youve left feed

RTF: on How Romantik ( Dissing Legend)

not really feelin it homie...no hate but it aint dat nice...elevate

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