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04-13-05, 03:56 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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You knew I was gone hit ya shit up son.....20 G's freestyling?....lol....but anyways....u been listening to alot of JR writer I see...cuz u flowed like he do...short lines wit echoed rhyming words....lyrically it wasn't spectacular but u don't freestyle alot so I wouldn't expect to be a monster lyrically...u had a few cool lines....flowed nice(due to ya mixing)....with out the echoes an libs...this would have been blan as fuck but u did a nice job sproosing it up...delivery was fair....u shoulda stressed some words or had some influctions u didn't really change up ya tone or tempo in this...so it got kinda repetitive but keep freeing son....stay up.....1
Aye yo and return that favor: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...359#post2082359
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