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Old 04-25-05, 05:50 PM   #1
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Looking Back

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I aint came in the game to get riches and hit bitches...
I came in the game to squish midgets and spit vicious...
I thought I came in the game with something to prove...
Now that I know it's proved, I've got nothing to lose...
When my pen meets my paper, the reaction begins...
Words start forming, then I start rappin and win...
With no contemplation, patiently waiting for one nomination...
Won't stop till I'm the topic of every conversation...
Or till my songs in rotation in a radio station...
And I don't wanna hear none of you crazy hoes hatin...
But for now I feel like I'm between a rock and a hard place...
So try and fuck with me I'll shove my cock in your mom's face...
I'm on pace, for anything I put my mind to...
Destroy anything I put my motherfuckin nine to...

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Old 04-25-05, 06:27 PM   #2
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yea yea....i liked the flow, except i would just put "patiently waiting for nominations" takin 'one' outta there, seems like it would flow better........but this, overall, was a solid piece, wish it coulda been a little longer, cause it was real...throw on a beat and you got a party happenin.......keep up
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Old 04-25-05, 07:01 PM   #3
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nice self glory.. like the way you structured and your vocab...your flow was good until you started rhyming words the rhymed with each other for about 6 lines... i liked the self glory tho nice job.....
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Old 05-01-05, 04:06 AM   #4
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Upping I guess...
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Old 05-01-05, 08:11 AM   #5
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nice drop really, expected something different after readig the title but was still nice... it flowed really well and had good vocab for the most of it. as said before it was a good self glorification..nice drop 7/10
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