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05-08-05, 09:09 PM
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Lyrics Put MCs On Atkin's Diet!
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"Out...Of...Place"
IP: 4772 0AC9
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2138472 he was born with heat, whether he would starve or eat nigga was on da streets unknown defeat, had da soul 2 beat, anybody who thought he was weak gravity shifted every fixation on distrust...lies...n deceit through this tech, he left bodies wet enough 2 make ya "pants" see "sweat" never rich never lift a pen 2 write up checks...had da right 2 lift up techs n delete ya families existence so when u try 2 "reminsce" u'll always 4get about em....skillful, he could aim 4 one man n kill every nigga around em fearful? unheard of...inside his mind had da power 2 cause brain damage if u doubt em somethin his father was definately proud of...age 10 bought him a loud slug mind of a genius...could infect a fetus so it'll be born wit different diseases whateva pleases, this nigga would "motion picture" fuck displayin da features watch out 4 amnesia bullets...dis kid is lethal "resurrection"...he'd murder a heart 3 times cuz he neva enjoyed seein "sequels" created a "heart 4 Dwight Grant"...false idol...gave all his "love 2 Sigel" want his moms dead...if she ain't with his pops he figured i dont need u unnatural rape, God couldnt help him escape, he rather face hell than Heavens gates life's lovin he hates, boundaries create, cause him 2 feel so out of place his heart won't race, it wears "batmans wings" he gotta live thru a "cape" supernatural powers go irate.....if u still alive, he can't live great put "souls on skates" just so ur road 2 death'll "sneak" right by ya wake spirits possessed, da devil is found...his "luck" ain "green", thought tank jus ran out blood flow? ran out....dat animal hunger got "cold" like birds it began 2 "fly south" saliva in his mouth? but why when he spit up theres no foam only red comes out? first time he cries, stare at da "past" cuz present has ceased "be4 ur eyes" but be4 he dies, he looks inside n tries 2 deny..he caught feelings of pride bone structure "sinks" but not every physical memory of him will "drown" not once didnt we frown, but now that he's gone it gave us a reason 2 smile Jeah...Talk To Me...
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05-08-05, 09:22 PM
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IP: 1C7B 52FE
decent drop, idea was..."self glorification"??
multi's n flow was decent, fell off on a couple areas but i wouldve enjoyed it more if it had more imagery..... . why do you use large writtin? font type kinda makes ya drops look hella messy |
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05-09-05, 06:10 PM
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IP: 4BE6 56FC
I Dunno, I Wrote This Shit A Min. Ago......Its Not Self Glorification Fool.......I'm Not Talkin About Me.......But Uppin This Shit
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C.S!....Crhyme Sindicate Quote:
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05-09-05, 07:07 PM
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IP: 3881 400B
It had an easy flow to follow and it had alright multies too. Here were some of my favorite lines:
unnatural rape, God couldnt help him escape, he rather face hell than Heavens gates life's lovin he hates, boundaries create, cause him 2 feel so out of place and bone structure "sinks" but not every physical memory of him will "drown" not once didnt we frown, but now that he's gone it gave us a reason 2 smile Overall nice drop.
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05-09-05, 07:19 PM
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IP: 4BE6 56FC
Jeah Good Lookin Kid........Imma Peep Ya Drop............Stay Up
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C.S!....Crhyme Sindicate Quote:
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