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Old 05-08-05, 05:03 AM   #1
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Yes i am back i re wrote this whole track cause i didnt like the way it was soundin...i thought it came out good took me about maybe hour tops to rewrite everything an record it enjoy.... http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/decreeus.htm


i left feed on cali's cold outside E's how to rob an some more but forgot they names lol....
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Old 05-08-05, 02:14 PM   #2
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Dope shit...Sounds like somethin Nas would spit...Good beat...Great quality...mic presence and emotion are pretty good...Lyrics are a little simple, could've upped them, but they are nice...This sounds like some old school shit...8/10...RTF and leave feed on my new joint "Dream Come True"

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Old 05-08-05, 04:23 PM   #3
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yea this shit is nice man. did u find a 3rd yet? anyway, ya flow is nice on this. you also got some nice meaningful lyrics here. that chick on the hook got on my nerves after a while but its all good. the beat was cool for this song. you couldve found some better though. all in lal this song was about an 8. stay up kid. and find a fuckin 3rd. lol
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Old 05-08-05, 09:51 PM   #4
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lol i gotta third fa sho ...thanks for tha feed to both ill hit up ya soundclicks ina min...
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Old 05-08-05, 10:20 PM   #5
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WHOA at the improvement of ya quality...I can understand your words now....I am loving the sample on the hook....ya flow is better but still not smoothe....some of ya lines is still a lil too long....an ya focusing too hard on delivering ya lyrics good...ya delivery isn't natural sounding yet....u still sound uncomfortable on the mic but you have greatly improved an ya track is def. listenable...keep it up fam.....overal this is 6.5/10.....stay up..........1
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Old 05-09-05, 01:47 AM   #6
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Word track was nice nigga... hot shit
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Old 05-09-05, 01:39 PM   #7
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Amazin u really changed up delivery ...u got the vibe now. well done
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Old 05-09-05, 03:18 PM   #8
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nice delivery, lyrics, flow and da best thing bout this song is da concept..........nice shit man

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Old 05-10-05, 06:45 PM   #9
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Beats aight quality wise this is decent real clear...i like the lyrics the topic is strongly held...i liked this track it was nice keep droppin fam
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Old 05-10-05, 11:14 PM   #10
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Good delivery and flow, nice lyrics, damn, you're quality did improve...loved the sample as well, keep dropping man, its good to hear people making moves...1
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Old 05-12-05, 04:30 PM   #11
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word thanks for tha feed ima hit them links up soon but am out for now...
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Old 05-15-05, 01:38 PM   #12
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i told u before i liked this shit stay up yo
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Old 05-20-05, 03:27 AM   #13
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Old 05-26-05, 11:04 PM   #14
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yo this was pretty nice, pretty good flow and lyrics, nice emotion and i liked the beat too

word keep reppin it for BluePrint
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Old 05-27-05, 08:20 PM   #15
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damn i dunno if its just me but the volume of this mix came in loud as fuck i had to turn down my speakers. beat is louder than the vocals turn those up. good emotional track, should add some more emotion or sumn tho but im likin the issues ur adressing n i like the sample over the hoook. no amazing flow but its better than half the site...u got an original presence but build on ya style... lyrics could be upped on the vocab side but u got a good topic goin for ya... damn it kidna cut out pretty suddenly but all in all this was an aight track keep droppin
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