this track originaly was spose to be for the "foul play" mixtape but i ended up recording n i wasnt feelin my verse at all, we both wrote to a different beat n then switched beats after writing, gattas pulls it off, i however dont think i did too good on this one, so ima put it up for now, probaly gonna redo this on a different beat tho, wat do u guys think? senser was gonna be on this one too but now ima have to tell him to switch to yet ANOTHER beat, o well all this time n effort put in should be worth something in the end...

gattas and omen

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links to replied tracks...

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=190079&page=1
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190544

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am at work cant peep it now...lol but ama get to it

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damn....rv is dead....

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Iight...

First dude:

Heard you before, and you are amazing...Love your voice and style...Lyrics were hot and so was the track...flow was fine

Second dude:

Pretty much the same as the first cat...Amazing talent with amazing lyrics...nice voice to go along with your unique style

8.4/10

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yea, but ima re do this n make it a 10/10!

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This was pretty straight, gattaz was pretty fire straight through and I was feelin omen on the lyrical side, but I could definately see what you were sayin bout writing this to a different beat, i also think the mixing on omens verse was a little weird, but my speakers are straight doo doo so it might just be my shit, beat selection wasn't bad, goodluck re-doin this, hope u get what your goin for. 1

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1st verse...decent lyrics, nice flow, liking your style....good job mang
2nd verse...also decent lyrics, okay flow...werd

overall this track wuz kool, i like the first dudes style, rtf on my first audio drop

6.5/10

The beats nice as fuck


Gattas - Nice verse, you took self glorifacation to the fullest here, punches good as always, style is nice, flow on his nice, delivery is nice, and I like you swictched up ya flow

Omen - you came good also, and it seemed like you had an accent, ya verse is nice

lol at seems like i have an accent, u donnt kno how much ive gotten that, like not in rap but in real life, ppl always ask me where im from im like, va since birth, nobodies ever told me i have a south accent english accent slang accent scottish accent ect, lol just i got my own speech i guess, sum ppl feel it sum ppl dont but hey im doin me rite? im actualy surprised that my parts been gettin good feed back lol i just got pissed when i finished recordin n said fuck it mixed it all offbeat n shit lol if u notice my part starts on tha second bar wen i recorded it on tha 1st lol. geez peepin this again i realize i gotta re record this tomorrow!

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YOu sound like a UK head

^ Hahahahahahaahahahahahahahahahaahahahaahahahahahah ahahaaha! Omg, Hold On, Omg! Hahaha, That Is By Far Tha First Time Ive Ever Ever Ever Gotten That! You Sir,, Just Made My Day! O Shyt, Uk, Like As In United Kingdom? O Man, R U Bein Serious? That Is Tha First Time N E One Has Said That Ever! Period! I Mite Have To Siggy That....

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beat is good...

1st guy...flow is straight....lyrics is straight, nothing special about it...pretty basic punchline verse...delivery is straight...vocals need to go up a lil bit...basic opener, not really my steez...

2nd...flow is coo...lyrics is straight to...delivery about the same as the first guy to...a decent verse...

really nothing stood out to me in this song...just a basic freeverse...

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