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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
05-22-05, 03:56 PM
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IP:
Your structure was off, also in the first bar it didn't rhyme which made that part suck. So work on ya strucuture and flow. I would give you a 4/10
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