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Old 05-26-05, 05:17 PM   #1
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Don't Stop remix

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Me, i'm rotten savage......a crooked ass nigga i can't deny my habbit
pullin trick's but i aint no rabbit on a cereal box haha.......god damnit
a nigga so sly, stayin so fly kinda like soul plane cuz i make soul's fly
wit da 4-5, F dot a grimey mothafucka pop a nigga when he stroll by
but that's how it is, that's tha way shit goes....... and if it's called for
i'll jack ya hoe; attack a hole but neva smack a hoe, that's uncalled for
please.....don't be appalled boy; cuz i'm a pimp that only smack's thighs
i be a true nigga wit shoes bigga than shaq's size;bitch don't ask why
I- keep pieces on me like a jigsaw, niggas hate on me cuz tha kid's raw
dem fuck niggas is cartoon's like wut u see on kid's drawls- and dats real

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Ma! I think it's safe to say
You ain't seen a playa lay this way
Or playa game this way
Wit a attitude, like - and ya don't stop
Aficionado, so fashionable
Wit a confident swagger, international
Game so tight the girls had to go
And you don't stop!

the flow's addictive when i chop it up; nah it's cocaine *get it?* cuz i chop it up
i keep a mac like tha rocket's club;my lyrics to hands is viagra how i got 'em up
truth's evident; my flow's heaven sent; caught a case or two but that's irrelavent
i'm a lyricist in it's rawest element i spit so fresh and clean you can smell a scent
you think i'm kiddin? i'll end ya state of being jack .................you niggas is odd
like hearin european's rap; claclickity clack click the sound of guns evens all odds
still breathin... you want me come get me; sayin you hard but in battle tired to shit me
but still i stay spiffy, writin lyrics cuz in spirit....LL's equivalent to a buncha femcees
and it's safe to say that i'm back now; rambunctious and menacin niggas like Bart Simpson
or rather killin 'em like OJ wit tha gloves missin cuz i'm tha best (yes)........it's such a good feelin

{hook}
Ma! I think it's safe to say
You ain't seen a playa lay this way
Or playa game this way
Wit a attitude, like - and ya don't stop
Aficionado, so fashionable
Wit a confident swagger, international
Game so tight the girls had to go
And you don't stop!
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Old 05-26-05, 05:32 PM   #2
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Old 05-26-05, 05:33 PM   #3
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done, can i get feedback from u?
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Old 05-26-05, 06:11 PM   #4
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Old 05-26-05, 07:24 PM   #5
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lol dat shit was nice was feelin da flow.........Had some nice rhymes and a good feel do it.only thing i saw wrong wit it was it need a better structure but other than dat da shit was fye......8/10 keep doing ya thang shawty
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Old 05-26-05, 10:20 PM   #6
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uppin 4 mo feed, structure will be addressed. i just had 2 drop somethin cuz i aint been on rv in a minute
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Old 05-27-05, 09:29 AM   #7
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Old 05-27-05, 01:06 PM   #8
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Old 05-27-05, 01:33 PM   #9
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this was pretty good, i give it a 7/10 u had a nice flow and some ok bars in there that li liked. personally im tired of people talkin about structure n shit, nah mean? u can't have all your bars matched up perfectly thats crazy lol so dont even worry about it. keep doin ya thing and return the favor wit an honest vote in my battle against Lyricle disciple.......links in the sig
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Old 05-27-05, 01:40 PM   #10
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aight dawg...thanx 4 feed. uppin dis shit. oh yeah, EF lives on
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Thiss was reall good. I give this 9/10. Thats because the flow is sick, i like the imagery. This would be a sick audio. Im feelin this one fate maybe me and u can collabo sumtime holla at me.
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Old 05-27-05, 02:07 PM   #12
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yea i give dis a 8/10; nice flow only a few bars were cool w/ me; uhm i just feel u coula came harder than dat but it was an okay piece; ya structure was on point too me(it really dont matta); keep up da work...1
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