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Old 06-05-05, 09:37 AM   #1
Xenofly
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Who says he didnt write it? Got ne proof? I'm an all around writer and I liv in an English council estate, ne1 can do nefin if they got the brains, the xperience and the inspiriation.

Neway I liked it not 2 lyrical but was deep and lyrical enuf 4 me. Used multis well and ur flow was almost consistant throughout. Saw a cuple of times where it was a bit off.

eg. "..More obsessed, possessed with the feeling it was blessed
And as the day past the night thought me it was ok to be depressed"

but keep it up it was nice.
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