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damn rv crashed lol ill set it agen if u still wanna battle..
30 mins check 30 mins drop... ill do mine now..

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 06-08-05 at 06:21 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

E.C has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-08-05 05:52 PM.

AckRite has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-08-05 05:52 PM.

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you "choke" n' squeem, at the site of the glock ready to bust,
Ackrite got "athsma"?...... You'd be better off biting the "dust",
The only way you got the record was from winning pussy fights,
How am i meant to lose a battle wit a Marques Houston lookalike,
Your "Atkins" lyrics must be "burning calories on us Emcees"
Must be you who's losing weight,
....................... coz you could never be phatter than me,
I'm all up in your face, like fat bitches wearing thongs,
You off the hook? i garentee that was just a string along,
You aint worth shit... fuck, i dont know why i bust a vein,
Coz delivering glass is the only time u bringing the pane, (pain)

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_explanations_

1st bar: Athsma-dust-choke lol
2nd bar: check his sig he looks like marques housten
3rd bar: checkl his user title.. went off that phatter (fatter)
4th bar: hook- string, fishing... bait lol not hard to work out
5th bar: pane of glass pain get it?

ight sry bout before fam rv was messed up i didnt even think i posted lol so g'luck pzz

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Evo's Myspace

E.C- Untitled

ight good verse man... uppin for votess...........

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Evo's Myspace

E.C- Untitled

Nice Verse But This Shits Bull....They Betta Take That Loss Away Man....Cuz Da Site Got Slow When I Started 2 Post Neva Got Da Chance 2 Get It Up

UPPIN

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Aeyo Uppin This Shit Lets Get Da Votin Started.........Dis Shit Aint Stayin Up 4 Months!

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Voted For: AckRite


AckRite=Vote...
Creativity=Tie...well done wit this..
Punches=Ackrite..Had more
Wordplay=E.Cs whas easier and seemed to need less explanation...
I Felt AckRite's Verse Mo...Nice Battle Fellas And Nice Drops...
RTF!!!
Truth vs. Twizted...or Truth vs..Dat other cat i'm battlin..caint remember...its been open...

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Voted For: E.C

you "choke" n' squeem, at the site of the glock ready to bust,
Ackrite got "athsma"?...... You'd be better off biting the "dust",
^^ok, but basic
The only way you got the record was from winning pussy fights,
How am i meant to lose a battle wit a Marques Houston lookalike,
^^nice personal...ownage
Your "Atkins" lyrics must be "burning calories on us Emcees"
Must be you who's losing weight,
....................... coz you could never be phatter than me,
^^decent, but come off as self glory a bit
I'm all up in your face, like fat bitches wearing thongs,
You off the hook? i garentee that was just a string along,
^^lol,.ok
You aint worth shit... fuck, i dont know why i bust a vein,
Coz delivering glass is the only time u bringing the pane, (pain)
^^seen this concept b4 off 9th dgree..
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overall you had a dope bar/personal in there
alot of soso bars...overall consistent verse
in a sense that nothin was wack.........,
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Establish This..Your A Fagget Bitch, Need Straight Eyes 4 Seein
Said It Yaself, You Gain NO RESPECT....& Admitted It In A PM!
^^ok, but you forced ya ryhme scheme bad here
Nigga Why Waste Time On Losin...Cuz Beatin ACT Ya Cant Do
Outcome Of Our Battles Ya Birthplace Backwards...Imma K-o U! (U.K....K.U.)
^^nah,i got it but to far fetched...ko dont=ku
Meetin Up Wit Ya Boyfriend Lata?..Figured I'll Help The Situation
& 'Rain Bows' On His Body to Get Him Dressed 4 The Occasion!
^^decent wordplay i was feelin this
Diseased As A Young Child So In His Mind, Infection = Relation!
Ya Raps Travel...Cuz Their Forced Here Like Rapist Immigration!
^^wasnt feeling the wordin or punch
My Verse You Datin.....So 'ACT Formal' Lyke DIRECT Invitations
Ya Brain Misplacement
.................Caused 'PURE Cockiness' Lyke Water Ejaculations!
^^feeling the meta..setup was iffy thou..
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overall you had a decent verse n the consistency was there
but you lacked in hard hitting punches...this was very close.
you just didnt capitalize on your bars n make them effective enough..good battle thou..cuz itwas close

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

ight uppin for more votes...............................

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Evo's Myspace

E.C- Untitled

Voted For: AckRite

Establish This..Your A Fagget Bitch, Need Straight Eyes 4 Seein
Said It Yaself, You Gain NO RESPECT....& Admitted It In A PM!
^^ Meh the link dont work, but nice personal and a punch.

Nigga Why Waste Time On Losin...Cuz Beatin ACT Ya Cant Do
Outcome Of Our Battles Ya Birthplace Backwards...Imma K-o U! (U.K....K.U.)
^^ Ahhhh Nice personal with a decent punch.

Meetin Up Wit Ya Boyfriend Lata?..Figured I'll Help The Situation
& 'Rain Bows' On His Body to Get Him Dressed 4 The Occasion!
^^ Meh i didnt like this bar of punch...gay jokes are played.

Diseased As A Young Child So In His Mind, Infection = Relation!
Ya Raps Travel...Cuz Their Forced Here Like Rapist Immigration!
My Verse You Datin.....So 'ACT Formal' Lyke DIRECT Invitations
Ya Brain Misplacement
.................Caused 'PURE Cockiness' Lyke Water Ejaculations!
^^ Alright both bars of punches was the rapist line got me rolling, nice decent punch w/ the closer.

you "choke" n' squeem, at the site of the glock ready to bust,
Ackrite got "athsma"?...... You'd be better off biting the "dust",
^^ Meh i didnt like this opener in my eyes, ok punch.


The only way you got the record was from winning pussy fights,
How am i meant to lose a battle wit a Marques Houston lookalike,
^^ Ok punch, should've word it better, then it'll be a decent punch, but its an ok punch.


Your "Atkins" lyrics must be "burning calories on us Emcees"
Must be you who's losing weight,
....................... coz you could never be phatter than me,
^^ LMAO! i like this punch, here decent with a personal. good wordplay.


I'm all up in your face, like fat bitches wearing thongs,
You off the hook? i garentee that was just a string along,
-Meh man this was played....I've seen this line so many times but word differently but still played out

You aint worth shit... fuck, i dont know why i bust a vein,
Coz delivering glass is the only time u bringing the pane, (pain)
^^ Alright i got it, it was a good wordplay with a punch.

Conlcusion=Both had good verse, but my vote goes to AckRite, he had decent wordplays with a punches w/ personals. E.C. you had few good lines, but the punches wasn't hitting harder than ackrite, for the reason because your punches wasn't word correctly, i suggest next time do more wordplays with personals and make it a punch, cause that "phaat" line was a example, but dawg the rest didnt hit harder..


Blah return a favor E.C. And ACKRITE

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Aeyo Uppin This Shit For Some More Votes...DENIED...I Voted On Dat Battle Already Ma

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