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Old 06-10-05, 10:15 PM   #1
Black Queen
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ok dis wasnt a good dis at all yo rhyme scheme was to easy 1st of all and stop writin and big font it make it look newbiest and the diss was jus str8 up wack your verse diss was betta den dis one you should really elevate try doin somemore kinds of open mic cus disses doesnt work fo you no beef
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