this is a track i had sittin around for a minute, finished it last week n was spose to have gattas and atom react on it, but i got bored of waiting and decided to put it up rite now... i dont like the chorus, threw it up real quick but peep n tell me what u think... thank you, drop links sweeties...

fall back

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=192838&page=1

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193856

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OMEN ON MYSPACE

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My boi finally droppin some songs..again..lol

More club Vibe.......u got clicks..fam.....clean that..lol Chorus was ok, flow was nice...u still got the reverb thing going but is ok Respirator line was nice...

overall was cool shit but not ya best

*return love ya dig?*..lol

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^triple N did the mixing... as for the clicks i didnt hear too many, and the reverb...well i dunno i like how trip edits so i have nothing to say about that... but yo, my fav line was rite after the respirater shit, "step ya game up like a playstation on an escalater" lol just had to put that down cuz the chorus goes over it n i dunno if u can hear it too well...lol @ club vibe, i dont see it, but its cool. ima get at one of ur tracks fam...

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what's up omen the beat was nice with the piano keys...it seems like the flow was rushed on this beat for some reason....sounds like the vocals were taken off another beat and placed on this for some reason....it just didn't seem to fit the beat maybe it's just me....quality was cool mine isn't the best so i can't comment on that u know...delivery sounds solid...i would wanna hear this on another beat to see if it flows better...chorus is nice though....7/10

^nah, i wrote my verse and put it to this beat... i just tried to hit it up quickly at some parts, maybe a bar or two is a few syllabols stretched... but yea, i mite remix this that would b tite to a slower beat or sumn.. ill try that, good thinkin...

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yea it just seemed like the vocals didn't fit the ebat maybe it's just my ears but i bet it would sound hot on a more suited beat.

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ma man....ooooohhh tha shadowville trilogies

listening as i type

boom comes da hook...i like the concept...its soundin pretty nice..u shud send this 2 shadowville after uve let me jump on this 4 the last verse

here come lyrics...ye yeaa u bk 2 ur punchline flow...i like the u cnt escape ma bars like u locked in prison, simple but nice, i aint hearin da clicks DV sed bout...id say turn dem vocals up a lil nice...ur last line blends well with the hook, i like da way it overlaps...that bar incl. respirator line is defo nicest in verse...got ma head bumpin yo....nice shiznit omen keep em comin, ima have sum tracks up in next couple of days so feed em when u c em...1

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solid joint havent seen much of ya work dawg but i liked this a bit it was decent mixing needs to be touched up but who's doesn t, flow was solid

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FIYAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

My boy Omen bringing the heat! That chorus was catchy as shit, had me rapping it by the 2nd time it came, verse was ill, nice flow throughout it all, I picked up minimal static, about the only thing that I can criticize. Man, I'm loving this, nice job really.

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