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Old 06-04-05, 10:21 PM   #1
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"The man"

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Today...
On top of my stairs...
I saw the man again...
Who wasn't there...
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Old 06-05-05, 01:00 AM   #2
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dude.. something.. makes me wanna say.. that this is a very dope piece..
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Old 06-05-05, 08:24 AM   #3
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When I was walking up the stairs...
I met a man that wasn't there...
He wasn't there again today...
I wish I wish he'd go away...

Dope.
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Old 06-05-05, 01:23 PM   #4
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......... oh ya, thats where I got the idea from

oh well, I bit a concept..
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Old 06-05-05, 06:34 PM   #5
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deep, short, powerful, raw

poetic scripture of june
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Old 06-05-05, 07:08 PM   #6
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wow, though this piece was short it said something...so much emotion packed into this small piece...great drop

RTF on my poem...My First Love...please
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Old 06-16-05, 03:06 AM   #7
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Old 06-16-05, 09:37 PM   #8
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yes thhis showed a great amount of emotion. short but had a HUGE story behind it. man i can think of a thousand ways to say that this is a great great piece. very nicely done.
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Old 06-16-05, 11:55 PM   #9
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^^ I'll hit you up with some feed on all your poems too soon
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Old 06-16-05, 11:59 PM   #10
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title "the man" haha, fucka man on my stairs, im the man bitches *is saying random shit*
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