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06-04-05, 10:21 PM | #1 | |||
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"The man"
IP: 591C A203
Today...
On top of my stairs... I saw the man again... Who wasn't there... |
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06-05-05, 01:00 AM | #2 | |||||||
*Im'a Hustla*
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IP: 28A8 B6DC
dude.. something.. makes me wanna say.. that this is a very dope piece..
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06-05-05, 08:24 AM | #3 | ||||
Light Weight
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IP: B5AE 7642
When I was walking up the stairs...
I met a man that wasn't there... He wasn't there again today... I wish I wish he'd go away... Dope. |
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06-05-05, 01:23 PM | #4 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 591C A203
......... oh ya, thats where I got the idea from
oh well, I bit a concept.. |
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06-05-05, 06:34 PM | #5 | |||||
in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
deep, short, powerful, raw
poetic scripture of june
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this world is a drug, and everyone's selfish FLY FREE |
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06-05-05, 07:08 PM | #6 | ||||
Light Weight
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IP: 0825 899A
wow, though this piece was short it said something...so much emotion packed into this small piece...great drop
RTF on my poem...My First Love...please |
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06-16-05, 03:06 AM | #7 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 591C A203
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06-16-05, 09:37 PM | #8 | |||
Banned: Biting
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IP: C1B3 89A4
yes thhis showed a great amount of emotion. short but had a HUGE story behind it. man i can think of a thousand ways to say that this is a great great piece. very nicely done.
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06-16-05, 11:55 PM | #9 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 591C A203
^^ I'll hit you up with some feed on all your poems too soon
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06-16-05, 11:59 PM | #10 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 591C A203
title "the man" haha, fucka man on my stairs, im the man bitches *is saying random shit*
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