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04-27-05, 11:11 PM | #1 | |||
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Metaphorically Speaking
IP: 3CAE 6243
“Metaphorically Speaking”… (society is shit)
I just want to say…:
“The declaration is erroneously spoke
P-Please, let me speak metaphorically I’ll continue to live by my own philosophy Society is a fucking joke, and it’s no joke…” Listen:
I, to cry a thousand times, to bleed profusely from my eyes To wish the world would not lead to it’s own demise I, to stampede, like a thousand unbridled horses I, to have dreams, for I too, dream of Porsches I wish to abort abortion, I think it’s murder I, to hear the whispers of a babies lost murmur To weep with them, and I have felt the sorrow Of those who know trepidation of not living tomorrow My eyes are a waterfall, I cry the tears of my people Black, white, brown, color is only for the feeble Then come the weekend, I’m always weakened Laboring double shift, I find it rather tiresome They say I tire some, with my many philosophies Well pardon me, for speaking metaphorically I feel empathically, and I’ve known struggle I, to feel your pain doubled when I’m on the double I, to gaze at the night’s stars, to think metaphysically After thousands of years, why haven’t we alleviated poverty? I, to suppurate, to wail, for the whale is a beautiful animal To cry once more, for numbers of species extinct is natural I, to ponder god’s will, saying we all came from Adam I, to ponder the science that says we all came from atom I, to shed tears, to glower and question our government T’was them that abounded the columbine shooters with weapons And I, to wonder why, were sent to war, to slay our brothers To wonder what has happened, to love from one human to another They, to say that violence is not the answer, so why, why… Why must we still be sent to countries to fight, and to die? We are blood cells, we live life in vain, so incise mine For I, would rather not cry till the end of time I, to give these signs of hope, but yet no one listens So I cry once more, for life isn’t worth living I, to once again proliferate hate for our damned government Why did they categorize us with races, countries and continents? T’was them, that caused chauvinism, racism disgusts me Were are all human, we are all the same species So I cry, for if we all lived as one, and shared our money Then there wouldn’t be any reason left for poverty If we united, we’d create an unstoppable force “the power of one” Yet I am the one, to cry, to mourn the death of god’s most beloved son I, to weep for a savior, whose death was in spite, sorrow grasps me And so, on Pegasus’s back I lead, angelic troops of high ranked Ptolemy I, am whatever you want me to be, I am nothing... but a mere message Now do you know why, I question why? For no man bothers to learn the lesson So now do you know why, I constantly cry? For no man listens to me I, to be the one, to be ignored, for I… am just speaking metaphorically Last edited by fluidmoon : 05-16-05 at 08:25 PM. |
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04-28-05, 02:53 AM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 52D6 462B
whattttt! Ima have to battle you.. actually I never battled poetry. How do you do that than it will be like a rap! yo yo yo that's gay? How in the hell do you battle poetry!
Well, I really like this one.. keep em coming! Sweft
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04-28-05, 03:30 PM | #3 | |||||||
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Dope drop homie...
I, to ponder god’s will, saying we all came from Adam I, to ponder the science that says we all came from atom ^ Good call.. |
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04-28-05, 03:31 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: 28AD 5545
wow, this is beautifully written and portrayed in your words, great vocabulary and concept, your emotion was strong in this piece, i enjoyed reading it and it is one of the best i've read today, since you wrote it after the cut off for featured poems,i will feature this next week, keep dropping..1
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04-28-05, 07:10 PM | #5 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3CAE 6243
I was hoping you'd say it was one of the best you've ever read, instead of read today, or atleast, the best I read today, not one of the best, THE BEST, :'(
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04-28-05, 07:59 PM | #6 | |||||
Rastafari Walk Tall
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IP: 6D60 A775
u n moi , need to battle go n join poetry league....
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04-28-05, 08:18 PM | #7 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3CAE 6243
Man, I gotta battle you Poetry, Common, Sweft, C.A.L.I, and Valor, then i'd def be called the sites best poet , lol, and I got a couple topicals coming up to merk cats, one including nostradamus if he accepts, :O
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04-29-05, 05:07 PM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: 3147 6785
^LOL ID MERK YOU SERIOUS AS WOULD ACUITY LOL YOUR GOOD BUT NOT THAT GOOD HOCAKE
ANYWAYS.....................I wish to abort abortion, I think it’s murder I, to hear the whispers of a babies lost murmur To weep with them, and I have felt the sorrow Of those who know trepidation of not living tomorrow THAT WAS FUCKING DOPE YOUR EMOTION AND VIVID DETAILS WERE GREAT ON THIS SOME LINES FELT THEY SHOULD HAVE BEEN WRITTEN BETTER HERE OVERALL THIS WAS A GOOD DROP STILL I LIKE HOW YOU DESCRIBED SO MANY ISSUES THAT TOUCH SO MANY PEOPLE BY DOING THAT ALOT OF PEOPLE WILL BE ABLE TO RELATE TO THIS HERE GOOD DROP HOMIE
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^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit? herb I OWN RB YOUR NAME GOES HERE SOCRATES
EFUSIVE PAIR-A-DYCE LYRIC
VALOR
OAKLEY SDIZZLE
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04-29-05, 05:38 PM | #9 | ||||
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IP: 3CAE 6243
Ya you might merk me... maybe, but you shouldn't be so confident either .... and this isn't my best piece by the way.. I've keyed all my poems so far
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04-29-05, 05:46 PM | #10 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3CAE 6243
AHAHA!!! I know who you are now man... I think your Daz^^^^^^^^ Jack The Ripper, Jack Rackam... too similiar, both from canada, haha you an alias of daz, that why he's not in korv
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05-11-05, 07:09 PM | #11 | ||||
R.I.P
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IP: 3CAE 6243
............. this was supposed to be featured..... so sticky it damn it
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05-11-05, 07:53 PM | #12 | |||||
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IP: 07A8 D079
We are blood cells, we live life in vain, so incise mine
For I, would rather not cry till the end of time I, to give these signs of hope, but yet no one listens So I cry once more, for life isn’t worth living ^^nice lines kid... good job..
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05-16-05, 09:25 PM | #13 | ||||
R.I.P
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IP: 3CAE 6243
yeye, i'll get back at you hotty and peep some of your shit
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06-04-05, 10:17 PM | #14 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 591C A203
Bom chicka chicka bom bom... Bom chicka chicka bom bom
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06-16-05, 03:06 AM | #15 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 591C A203
womp womp chicka
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