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J.Terror 5 100.00%
Predator 0 0%
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Old 06-24-05, 03:12 PM   #1
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J.Terror vs Predator

IP: 25E2 9B3D

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Old 06-24-05, 03:12 PM   #2
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Old 06-24-05, 03:14 PM   #3
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J.Terror has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-24-05 03:14 PM.
 
Old 06-24-05, 04:08 PM   #4
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His name J.Terror, he scares nobody, he wack yo/
When its beef, he like sugar, cuz he lac-tose//
He from the Caribbean, y'all ever heard of this lame?/
J. talkin?,I'ma wipe out the Caribbean,my guns like hurricanes//
So J. are u scared or what ?/
Cuz I take ya bitch and J. please believe I'ma Ter-ror up//
J.Terror ain't hot, that's why he said he a Free Agent/
J. yo flow basic, jus face, bro, u ain't sick//
He like to smoke but can he rap/
On this mini track I smoked him like 20 sack//

Breakdown:
>When its beef, he like sugar, cuz he lac-tose-- this means that when there is drama he doesn't have a gun on him--- lactose is the sugar than is in dairy products
>In the West Indies there are bad hurricanes and cities are wiped out.
>Cuz I take ya bitch and J. please believe I'ma Ter-ror up
--- this is a play on his name J.Terror
--- by Ter-ror up I mean I'ma beat up y'all know what that mean
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Old 06-24-05, 05:06 PM   #5
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Your never slaying-a-prey, bitch your better off saying-a-prayer
Because ya punches always"miss"- sorta like nun teaching careers

He's an obese chick witha temper,da way he's hoping to toss my salads
Olny chance at winning, is zip lockin my breath or rigging site ballots

Inflictin punishments with pens, punches got dude airbourne like pilots
Only way peoples gonna b "number 1" is at the library "asking for silence"

You could look in mirrors underwater-& still not reflect nice flow
Batterring this pussy without feet in the air, like battling female nympo's

Pre's a crack head in a sand storm, the way his "dope lines" never land
I'l discipline this bitch, even tho his battle wins are always "out-of-hand"
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Old 06-24-05, 05:09 PM   #6
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From: Da C'bbean-T.T
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edit...
bar 3-Only way peoples gonna think u "number 1" --is at the library "asking for silence"
explanation: when you ask for silence u put ya index finger on ya lips..get it?
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Old 06-24-05, 08:01 PM   #7
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From: Da C'bbean-T.T
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Uppin............................................. ............
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Old 06-25-05, 08:19 PM   #8
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can i get a vote or what???
pre atleast try to up this shit mayne, even thoug u gone lose
fuck i gotta do erthang, fuckin bitch..........I'm uppin.............
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Old 06-25-05, 08:57 PM   #9
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Your never slaying-a-prey, bitch your better off saying-a-prayer
Because ya punches always"miss"- sorta like nun teaching careers
^^^OK.....didn''t like the first line
He's an obese chick witha temper,da way he's hoping to toss my salads
Olny chance at winning, is zip lockin my breath or rigging site ballots
^^nah...this one suked
Inflictin punishments with pens, punches got dude airbourne like pilots
Only way peoples gonna b "number 1" is at the library "asking for silence"
^^OK
You could look in mirrors underwater-& still not reflect nice flow
Batterring this pussy without feet in the air, like battling female nympo's
^^^Nice
Pre's a crack head in a sand storm, the way his "dope lines" never land
I'l discipline this bitch, even tho his battle wins are always "out-of-hand"
^^Nice

Well....you had some nice lines in this.The best one was the 2nd one.Water/flow jokes are played out.Flow was Ok in this.

His name J.Terror, he scares nobody, he wack yo/
When its beef, he like sugar, cuz he lac-tose//
^^OK
He from the Caribbean, y'all ever heard of this lame?/
J. talkin?,I'ma wipe out the Caribbean,my guns like hurricanes//
^^^OK
So J. are u scared or what ?/
Cuz I take ya bitch and J. please believe I'ma Ter-ror up//
^^what the hell....1st line so short...2nd so long.But a Nice punch.
J.Terror ain't hot, that's why he said he a Free Agent/
J. yo flow basic, jus face, bro, u ain't sick//
^^^didn't rhmye,and u area free agent too
He like to smoke but can he rap/
On this mini track I smoked him like 20 sack//
^^floed good,but whack

Well....this was waay better than the verse you posted against me.If you had kept ur lines the same lenght and wrote it differently.....you would have gotten this shit mad easy.But you had some lines with 4 words ....then the line after was line 20.Can';t do dat.Look how J. Terror wrote his lines.But you had some nice werdplay.Just didn't do it right.

Vote-J.Terror(vote in link below please)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196531
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Old 06-27-05, 11:24 AM   #10
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From: Da C'bbean-T.T
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fuck predator he fraid to get his loss........................UPPINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
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Old 06-27-05, 06:46 PM   #11
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yo...............return the favor for my vote.....click on this link becuase you dun have 100 posts.(ignore link at bottom of my vote)
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=196901

If ya don't by tommorow...........I'ma remove my vote.
Sry but I'm gettin tired of havin my battles slept on.
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Old 07-11-05, 11:29 PM   #12
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Come on y'all gotta vote.
I keep smashin cats and y'all ain't votin
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Old 07-13-05, 03:31 PM   #14
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Voted For: J.Terror

It was close but Predator's rhyme put me to sleep...i got drool on my keyboard yo
 
Old 07-13-05, 04:01 PM   #15
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Chief
Voted For: J.Terror

Aight this was a real close battle........like real close both had good imagery and good metas....i mean both were well written....i mean i like 1st closer, it was dope, really made me think, and i liked 2nd intro which was nice....basically the only way to decide who won this battle was who stuck to the topic or in my eyes who itnerprated teh topic betta .........and that was 2nd....dont get me wrong 1st was dope, but to me it didnt fit the topic as well as 2nds.....jus my opinion though


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