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Old 07-11-05, 11:17 AM   #1
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yo im writing a three chapter song like trapped in the closet but its like playing roles but cant decide on topic which u think its better
Bank Heist

Different Masks

which is better or do u got another topic that can help me out plz post it here need yall opinions......gon be madd dope
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Old 07-11-05, 11:26 AM   #2
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Different masks, that seems more original. Go with that..
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Old 07-11-05, 02:02 PM   #3
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yea thats more original anybody else got more ideas plz help me out......
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Old 07-11-05, 02:15 PM   #4
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yo im writing a three chapter song like trapped in the closet but its like playing roles but cant decide on topic which u think its better
Bank Heist

Different Masks

which is better or do u got another topic that can help me out plz post it here need yall opinions......gon be madd dope


That could either turn out real good. Or it could be compleatly weird and fucking gay. Better ask somebody
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Old 07-11-05, 02:38 PM   #5
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nah its gon turn out real good i kno how to set things up i think.....lol so which one u think its better
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Old 07-11-05, 03:51 PM   #6
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yo alot of yall viewed is just let me kno which ones better to do and thats it dont be a herb......lol
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Old 07-11-05, 03:57 PM   #7
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i dont really understand the different masks thing
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Old 07-11-05, 07:36 PM   #8
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is like im usin diff. masks to do diff. tasks u kno but uppin this for more opinions plz
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Old 07-11-05, 08:00 PM   #9
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Do the Bank Heist one and if you're doin 3 chapters then use the perspectives of:

1) The bank robber
2) The bank manager
3) a witness

If you put enough emotion and imagery into it then it will turn out real good for real
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Old 07-11-05, 08:10 PM   #10
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please don't use "trapped in the closet" not good, someone said witness, and i like bank heist, it really depends on what you are trying to get across,if your post had more details on the song, then name choices, then we could help..you know?
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Old 07-11-05, 08:13 PM   #11
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Masks. Just sounds better.
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Do the Bank Heist one and if you're doin 3 chapters then use the perspectives of:

1) The bank robber
2) The bank manager
3) a witness

If you put enough emotion and imagery into it then it will turn out real good for real


That would probably be best.
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Old 07-12-05, 08:40 AM   #13
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ok its 3-2 for bank heist need more opinions i wanna make this dope so plz leave ur opinions thnx u in advance.....
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Old 07-12-05, 10:23 AM   #14
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OK 4-2 bank heist idea need more opinions the first to five i will do plz more opinions thnxyall
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Old 07-12-05, 11:27 AM   #15
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vote - not ripping off r kellys concepts

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