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Old 07-14-05, 08:16 PM   #1
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Open Your Eyes Feat. Sabotage

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Black=-Cezar-
Navy=Sabotage

Started off struggling,Father left at a wrong age
Im still stumbling,The world makes me feel caged
Bombs keep dropping,And I cant figure out why?
Hearts still stopping,Seeing Innocent People die
Children at the tender age of 8 among these corpses
Forced to live a life of crime cause parents werent supportive
Its either run the streets and emulate their favorite rappers

They stay by the heat,cuz to them life isnt a factor
Nobody took the time to teach em or take em under their wings
Eventually growin old and influenced by the lies they see on TV

Take time to make decissions,To see if it is worth Living
The world needs fixin,Firetrucks driving by burning buildings
If you hear this,Dont be like them and throw away your life
Step out the dark into the light,so the world can see you shine
Crips and Bloods,Preps and Thugs,Black and White
Theres know love,Except for putting out the light of a life
Lettin our guards down in hopes that our hands break our fall
The racial walls,that MLK broke years ago still seperate us all
Imagine what he would say,if he seen the state we're in today

Bet he would say,Damn I guess god made a mistake taking me away


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Old 07-14-05, 11:11 PM   #3
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yeah this was good, great flow, vocab was good, both flowed together very well, good collab, keep it up
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Old 07-14-05, 11:44 PM   #4
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thnx for the feed...werdizzle
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Old 07-15-05, 12:58 AM   #5
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thanks a lot for the feed..........
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Old 07-15-05, 10:47 AM   #6
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bump............
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Old 07-15-05, 11:23 AM   #7
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That was one of the best OM's I read on RV since I was here I swear that was hot I was really feelin that topic cause the shit yall was sayin was true deep stuff foe this is a 9/10
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Old 07-15-05, 11:54 AM   #8
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bump like mofo.............
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Old 07-15-05, 01:32 PM   #9
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bump like I walk in the club all eyes on me...werdizzle
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Old 07-15-05, 01:34 PM   #10
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hot shit man, fo' real. it switched between the both of you nicely, managing to flow well throughout ur piece. it woz structured well, and you had a good use of vocab. gud piece
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Old 07-15-05, 02:02 PM   #11
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yeh this woz hot shit good topic stayed on topic erm i liked this a lot kept me reading gud stay up 9/10
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Old 07-15-05, 02:17 PM   #12
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damn these nerds freak harder than a bird's beak I can't coorect these so homey do you peck trees? so -Cezar-you on a long route with the wrong clout and the fun narrows like gun barrels KABOOM? got a bundle of funk while you fumble chump but why would you grumble punk?
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Old 07-15-05, 02:36 PM   #13
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^^^ok....translation?.....bump
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Old 07-15-05, 02:51 PM   #14
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Nobody took the time to teach em or take em under their wings
Eventually growin old and influenced by the lies they see on TV

^yes they do....

ive seen concepts lyke this done plenties....but i do say...yu guys did the topic justice....props....i lyke the way it was organized....flow was onpoint....content was good....

keep doin yus

IMMA GURL, btw...damn it!!!
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Old 07-15-05, 04:25 PM   #15
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yeah yeah.......thanks for the feed from everyone

..even MaddRapper..even though we dont kno what u talkin about
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