Listening through Audio Technica STH-M40fs studio monitor headphones.

I don't liek the way this beats starts off, mostly because I cna't stand overly-synthed sounds that are obviously not made with a real instrument. Jsut a flat-ass midi tone.

Vocal quality is on the money as expected, but you needed to EQ some of the 808 outta the bass in the beat since when it really hits I cna't hear you at all. The lyrical content of the first verse was average, delivery was dead on. The hook, the "come on then nigga" should have had some of the reverb and some of the compressoion taken down because it really thins out the effectiveness of it and makes it sound flat. The hook it self has the same problem where you can't really make out specifically wht you're saying - just kinda hearing the sounds and the melody of it. Just sounds vague and makes it obvious that you're just going through the motions to bang out a club track. Second verse brings some much needed diversity to the delivery so the verses don't all sound a like. It peaked my attention again when you changed the cadence in the second verse where as I was starting to zone out prior to that. The third verse reminds me of the first one where as it had nothing that made me really say "damn, that's pretty hot". I think it's the mundane deliv in it. Switch it up - attack the cadence from time to time. Stall it out, flip it up, etc.

I feel the same about the outro as I do on the intro. I'm also personally getitng bored with you and club songs. Starting to seem liek a stereotype of NNN.


Honest feed as always. Uno.

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