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Old 07-22-05, 10:00 AM   #1
S e n s e R
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iight im listenin...beat sounds smooth..

1st cat..starts off smooth..nice simple flow...but for some reason...havin no adlibs take away quality if you had adlibs i think it'll sound nice..you should try that but you was good homie..

2nd cat...he nice just sounds alil too mad for this beat..lol just kiddin be thats ya voice but you flowin real nice..wit the snares and kicks of the beats homie..so far yall all doin good...

3rd cat..ya intro sounded alil weak...but you spittin nice man..you see now you did adlibs..it sounds good..yall should try addin adlibs to the first cats verse...but this is a good track..though im not a fan of the lovely dub dub shit but yall pulled it off nice track i'll give this a 7/10 cuz theres alil things yall could work on to make it sound alot better but its still good na'mean well im out 1ne..
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