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5 | 83.33% |
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07-26-05, 10:45 AM
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R.A.W Reality Has Began!!
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fuck my vote coz its meant too be feed for shitty weezy
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07-26-05, 12:08 PM
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This was feedback posted for Stanza
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checkin pollz an aight battle.....................
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07-26-05, 01:59 PM
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Voted For: Stanza
yours overall was better it had better rhymes and was delivered better also i like the last line his was ok it hadd good punches but i think you got it Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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07-26-05, 06:43 PM
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Voted For: Stanza
first off you bit a ludachris line with more shit out on the streets then evicted tenants so you dont get my vote nice job ass Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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07-26-05, 06:47 PM
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Supernatural.
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This was feedback posted for Keyweezy
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07-26-05, 07:29 PM
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Banned: Biting
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Ludacris Line? Man STFU I Know how his line go his line say Im Gettin Shit off The Streets From Evicted Tenants .............So STFU and Go Sit down B4 I merk Yo ass ............. my Line is totally different from luda's line .......... |
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07-26-05, 08:11 PM
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Voted For: Stanza
Serious. I don't like you, I mean you smiled, & looked aroused When I warned him before the bout he was "Going down"! ^^weak punch....but it was worded ight..so ya get points for that RV don't want you here. It's over now you're sparring w/ fear.. So I'll gauge your eyes w/ diamonds - so the victors crystal clear. ^^^blah......weak You'll sea no votes yo, wave good bye to this battle, cuz you're getting sonned n'.. Stans resembles water ..^.. the way when it boils down to it you're nothing! ^^OK....I guess Ur punches weren't exactly all that hot.You worded ya lines Ok.....that may have been the plus side to ya verse.Ya flow was choppy at points...speccially in that last line.Just make ya punches hit harder. When I Smack Yo Tongue W/ Oil Was The Only Time Yo Words Shined Your FootSteps Bcuz the More of You I Take The more I Leave Behind ^^Played as fuck...I heard this a couple times before Im Puttin Yo Shit Out On The Streetz..... Like It Was Evicted Tenants They Call Me Breath Bcuz you couldnt Hold me for more Than a Minute ^^^people could hold they breath longer than a minute I didnt See Your Determination In Yo Eyes Bcuz Im Busy Merkin Yo Face You Got Light Lyrics The Way They Fill The Room And Take Up No Space ^^^OK.................not all that bad You had a played bar at first....but it got better afterwards.To me.....this verse was nothing special.Rhyme scheme sucked.But I think your punches had a slight edge to Key. Vote-Stanza |
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07-29-05, 12:40 AM
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Voted For: Stanza
Stanza When I Smack Yo Tongue W/ Oil Was The Only Time Yo Words Shined Your FootSteps Bcuz the More of You I Take The more I Leave Behind Ha..pretty good opener Im Puttin Yo Shit Out On The Streetz..... Like It Was Evicted Tenants They Call Me Breath Bcuz you couldnt Hold me for more Than a Minute Ahh..could have been better..okay concept I didnt See Your Determination In Yo Eyes Bcuz Im Busy Merkin Yo Face You Got Light Lyrics The Way They Fill The Room And Take Up No Space Ha..pretty good closer Overall nice decent verse..had a couple okay punchlines..some okay meta's..overall keep it up Keyweezy Serious. I don't like you, I mean you smiled, & looked aroused When I warned him before the bout he was "Going down"! Ahh...naw RV don't want you here. It's over now you're sparring w/ fear.. So I'll gauge your eyes w/ diamonds - so the victors crystal clear. Hah..nice You'll sea no votes yo, wave good bye to this battle, cuz you're getting sonned n'.. Stans resembles water ..^.. the way when it boils down to it you're nothing Dont really rhyme Overall vote-Stanza for having a better overall verse..keep it up
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07-29-05, 12:44 AM
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07-29-05, 11:44 AM
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07-29-05, 04:59 PM
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Nt Your Average
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This was feedback posted for Stanza
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stanza took this by miles man key u need to elevate
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07-29-05, 04:59 PM
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Nt Your Average
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shit supposed to be a vote^.........................................
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07-31-05, 10:24 PM
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Banned: Biting
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.............................................Still Uppin 4 da last time damnit @!!!!
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08-01-05, 03:42 AM
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Voted For: Keyweezy
You got him by a nice little punch line good work I liked the crystle line it was hot..................... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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08-01-05, 12:55 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP:
Livin Legend Stay Outta my Fuckin Battles Hoe
One line votin And Shit |
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