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07-29-05, 07:36 PM
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QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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Defying The Odds
IP: 00A2 4ED0
Defying The Odds
Behind The Story I really don’t know much of what went on before I was born Or just of what such stuff did my biological mother do wrong All I know is what I have been told, and that’s more than enough Said to be born in a room so cold, due to my mom being locked up My father?…is dead to me and the world, I’m all that is left to exist And again, the suspicious of me thinking…is this what my mother did? It is said it didn’t hurt, since he was shot directly at the back of his head So I can’t forgive and forget even if she gave me birth, to me she is dead They took me away from a fucking crook, and put me into a foster home Like a ripped page out of a book, anywhere else put and I wouldn’t belong The Neighborhood The sound of kids laughing, running, playing games throughout the day Music blastin, fights…a lot of it, in the night it’s nothing near a merely game Gun shots, the sound of those in pain, loud screams of which won’t let me sleep Corrupted cops, hustlin with kids night and day, will this be the future of me? No fun and games, kids with no education and not wanting of knowing anything All done everyday the same way, on the corner…dealing drugs to them is everything A crack-house right in front of an elementary school, and drugs for money well spent Even 5th graders goes in for a dime bag of it so he can look cool in front of his friends Parents of up to 5 kid are not being home where they’re needed the most Getting paid less than immigrants and stuck at work cuz of a jerk they call a boss The House Color red paint, windows with no screen, ceiling’s about to collapse Sounds of yelling out late, won’t let me sleep, with no time to relax Bed with no cushion when asleep, springs of it hurts my back At night not able to see, due to no light…room’s all pitch-black A dog so vicious, that I was never let to see the back of the crib now Dog’s name is kisses, but the name don’t fit it like the size of this house 5 bedrooms, 2 bathrooms, a kitchen, and cellar way down I get the smallest room, and in the cellar is where I spend my time-out Webs on the corner floor, dust covers it all, and bars on the windows Useless shit been stored, solid brick walls, locked doors wherever I go A house that is known to be just like the corner grocery store No better than expired thing that nobody wants no more The Life Since I turn the age of 13 my life as I know it changed in all aspects in life Took school serious since my foster parents never let me go outside They said it was to dangerous for kid of my stature but I went outside anyways More than illusion of my future success, when getting high off the haze Selling drugs at first for the little extra money that I was able to get With it I saved up for college still dreaming of my future success Wanting to become as rich as Bill Gates, a smart intellectual business man To learn is never too late, everything taught I would understand But at the same time it was like a dream that I would never be able to get Something to far from my reach, even if I stretched out for it Many ask me how I really do live my fucking half damaged life By living my life on the edge like a string onto a sharp knife The Success Now twenty-five years old, I have a business of my own Started on my success once I left that what I called a foster home And now as rich as I wanted to be since I was a young one With that little bit of money saved I learned how to make big bucks No thanks to those that I called mom and dad for almost half of my life It’s weird cuz they call me, asking how it’s been, how’s is it like Fuck the bitch who gave me birth in a fucking prison cell Broke out, taken into something much worst than jail itself Still with the problems I face threw all my life, look what I get Defying the odds, and making a tragic life a big success Links: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2328808 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2328813 Last edited by Symbol : 07-29-05 at 07:49 PM. |
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07-29-05, 07:49 PM
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QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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IP: 00A2 4ED0
*waiting for feed*
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07-29-05, 09:18 PM
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QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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IP: 00A2 4ED0
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07-29-05, 09:41 PM
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IP: 5285 DC82
this is a good read....long but nice......
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07-30-05, 02:14 AM
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QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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IP: 00A2 4ED0
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07-30-05, 10:09 AM
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Middle Weight
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IP: CF74 5D3A
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202250 (peep my post leave a rhyme or critique
Verses I throttle quicker after a bottle of liquor get cats Drunk off this hot funk when I drop junk and wet hats Like traffic this stuff graphic like stop lights when my plot Right glow hot and bright in the club for a tight thug will slop A scrub, “so boo I hope for love in soap and suds in the bath tub You wash my back and you wash mine afterward squash wine and grubs Then view hot porn snack on pop corn” MADD you want complex sex right?” “You read my mind well boo” “MADD the hell with you panties staying put tonight” |
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07-30-05, 12:26 PM
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QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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IP: 00A2 4ED0
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FUCK OFF YOU SUCK.......................anyways uppin |
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07-30-05, 12:42 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: CF74 5D3A
go ahead and do something on my post http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202250
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07-30-05, 02:53 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: CCCB 994B
This was hot I Liked they way of how you gave each thing its own flow and verse you have probably some of the best imagination on RV and you get deep with it too the vocab was good structure was good I give this a 9/10 keep doin what you do rtf "Grand Finale" thanxx
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07-31-05, 06:12 PM
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QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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IP: 00A2 4ED0
thnx.............................................. .....................
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08-01-05, 09:23 PM
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QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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IP: 00A2 4ED0
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08-01-05, 09:25 PM
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RV aint Dead
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IP: 7C0D BAF5
it good man no doubt about it
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08-01-05, 09:50 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
you know what man.....i like reading your stuff.....i just got done with your other o/m and now this....wow really good 9/10 nice structure good flow vocab and multis were iffy but nothing to hate on.....keep progressin and return the favoor
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08-02-05, 12:09 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: CF74 5D3A
you know what you are a no rhyming fuck you can say i suck all you want man BONECOLLECTER need to start AN EFFECTIVE WRITING SITE this is all this shit is any dang educated person with no rhyming skills can write this NO ATTITUDE ITS JUST A BORING STORY HOW THE FUCK CAN YOU CLASS YOURSELF AMONE THE GIFTED A GOOD RAPPER WOULD HAVE TO CHANGE THIS SHIT AROUND A MILLION TIMES
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08-02-05, 02:18 PM
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QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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IP: 00A2 4ED0
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STFU b4 I merk you in audio and/or topical you and bone. |
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