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Old 07-31-05, 10:05 PM   #1
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black queen your verse is weak firsr off it don't rhyme enough plus what are you doing rhyming the same words show lack of skill

2. you have to learn to write in first person dang girl you let no attitude out in this rhyme at all in rap i'll have to rate your verse 2/10 impossible to rap this with any succession

lmao thx fo da feed............
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Old 08-01-05, 12:41 AM   #2
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black queen your verse is weak firsr off it don't rhyme enough plus what are you doing rhyming the same words show lack of skill

2. you have to learn to write in first person dang girl you let no attitude out in this rhyme at all in rap i'll have to rate your verse 2/10 impossible to rap this with any succession



words came right outta my mouth
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Old 08-01-05, 02:22 AM   #3
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words came right outta my mouth

damn u still drollin on mah ass get off of it n let it breath n stop postin where i postin u stalkin me kid get a life
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Old 07-31-05, 09:16 PM   #4
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Go rate her Elsewhere.....Fuck outta here if u aint droppin about the Piece

Wack Rapper
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Old 07-31-05, 10:52 PM   #5
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yeh my pleasure queen and that conceded partner of yours need to grow the fuck up homey
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Old 08-01-05, 12:35 AM   #6
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^^^naw u need to grow up cus dat verse was in 1st person u didnt read it
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Old 08-01-05, 12:37 AM   #7
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Im jus stickin up 4 Blk.....call it wha it iz
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Old 08-01-05, 02:07 AM   #8
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Macreep thanks for being truthful but yeah queen if you call me whack then people will expect you to be unfuckwitable and you're not straight up girl
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Old 08-01-05, 02:32 AM   #9
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Why are ya Still talkin shit

Yet not Mention a Battle....

If no Battle is Mentioned....Fuck out the thread

And Creep leave her alone...b4 i Petition Strobe

that your Harrasing Queen...jus like u told on 9th
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Old 08-01-05, 02:44 AM   #10
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fuck you troop you haven't peeped mine you two face bitch now i'm coming with a diss whack conceded below average fuck
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Old 08-01-05, 02:48 AM   #11
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Your 0-2

Didnt kno u could spell ....conceded .........Like that

Get ya vocab righ 1st Lil Shit

*Nuff Said*
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Old 08-01-05, 03:05 AM   #12
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fuck the record its as fake as your conceded ass coming at you in a jiff
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Old 08-01-05, 03:52 AM   #13
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Are u from England?

I dont understand your Proper Jib Jabb

i hope u get Banned from Om...

Keep talkin...

Cheerio...
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Old 08-01-05, 11:28 AM   #14
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nice om this was a tight on man
a yo dont even worry about macreep man i think he just hating on black queen
but i liked the om nice collabo and good topic
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Old 08-01-05, 12:39 PM   #15
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first off this was a very creative drop.....i liked the emotion you both used and the way one verse flowed into the other.....also the way your different styles complemented each other....i enjoyed reading it...keep doing it ya'll
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