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08-03-05, 05:58 PM
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~lyrical confucius~
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uppin to the top out the roof
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08-03-05, 06:02 PM
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Some gangsta shit RV hasnet seen in a minute.....shit was hot had me bustin a verse for it......man keep up da good work and i hope we see some more shit like dis
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08-03-05, 07:37 PM
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^^^Fo sho Tony Green back and RV had lost they most gangsta nigga well I'm back and I'm bout to put it down for the streets and the hood UPPIN!
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08-03-05, 08:35 PM
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thiss right hurr was a tight piece every thing was solid let me break it down :
Tony Green: Straight gangsta good flow good structure vocab could enhance but the raw emotion of anger was shown good metaphors 8/10 Mc Philosipher: Structure was a problem for me....ur lines were too long at points some lines were played....still gangsta good metaphors as well....multis iffy 6/10 ~B~: Structure was a plus on this...had a good flow wasnt really fealin some of the rhymes but u clarified ur time problems. vocab was tight coulda been better tho still straight gangsta as well..6/10 M-Eazy: Structure was not too good u and tony had the same kinda thing goin straight gangsta probally the most attitude....flows goood...work on vocab a lil but i felt it....7/10 overall a very nice piece felt the anger and the gangster in you all liked it very much i enjoyed reading it please rtf on my collab wit the sick one or my others......thanks |
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08-03-05, 09:04 PM
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Thanxx uppin!!!!!
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08-03-05, 11:06 PM
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~lyrical confucius~
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uppin thanx for feedback nice callabo tony green
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08-04-05, 01:00 AM
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Uppin to the top!
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08-04-05, 07:30 PM
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uppin to the top!
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08-05-05, 12:29 AM
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uppin to the top!
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08-05-05, 04:32 PM
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~lyrical confucius~
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uppin for some feedback
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08-06-05, 01:26 AM
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ayyo i liked this one..
kept it gangster without losing the talent unlike some Rv gangsters who jus rap like 50 cent you manages to talk about guns and violence in a classy way.. i liked the flow, rolled off the tongue nicely vocab was decent, nothin special.. i liked tony greens verse myself flow 9/10 vocab 6/10 multies 5/10 rhyme scheme 8/10 overall drop.. 8/10 return the favor my dude.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203072
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08-06-05, 01:29 AM
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Thanxx still uppin
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08-06-05, 08:42 PM
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