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Old 08-02-05, 12:11 PM   #1
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.Sound Check.

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Mystery Produced This...She Used A Sample From HSD Records...And Freaked It....

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1st Verse: Mystery
Hook: BOTH
2nd Verse: Six(me)


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Old 08-02-05, 12:12 PM   #2
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Old 08-02-05, 01:31 PM   #3
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yo i liked ur flow...and ur vioce ....u black chick so u gotz my attention...(i love black chicks)...anyway ur vocab was aight....not bad could be improved....ur flow was on...and i LOVE that beat....defitnly not bad ma...8/10....by the way u have any pics?
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Old 08-02-05, 01:38 PM   #4
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i dont like beat ... mystery sounds cool... flow is on a lil basic confident but lacks attitude... needs attitude.. lyrics are iite lil basic.... mhooks cool.... beats really too commercial for me.... u sound cocky suits it alot better.... delivery is cool.. lyrics are ok basic still.... ye your a ver commercial style MC.. not my type of music... but not bad for wat it is will appeal to people into da more mainstream scene so cool... quality is ok
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Old 08-02-05, 01:46 PM   #5
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^eh...we not realli commercial...but realli...sometimes yu gotta give the people want they wanna hear...ya know a lot of people like that commercial shit...somethin i dont realli like either.....our track..."I Shouldnt Be"...should be up later...and ya'll can see whats realli good....

an on that basic stuff...her philosophy: if its commercial...dont realli need to be all that indepth...who's gonna realli care?

thanx..i appreciate it....
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Old 08-03-05, 12:25 PM   #6
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bumpity...i'll most lykely return the favor....
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Old 08-04-05, 04:57 PM   #7
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listening:

Beat: Love The Intro, pretty dope, lol reminds me of Final Fantasy
Lyrics: pretty cool
Flow: Pretty dope lol
Quality: yeah pretty good love the beat ! lmao final fantasy

overall pretty dope girl
8/10
Chorus is pretty dope
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Old 08-04-05, 06:41 PM   #8
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Listening: Intro is weird...Lil Vercacity...flow is aight beat reminds me of Lylat Wars the N64 game lol...not the best beat i heard Lil's flow on this is coo should be switched up though...rhymes a lil basic but this is an aight track had me head boppin for a sec lol...it's the flow and lylat beat thats catchy lol...keep droppin
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Old 08-07-05, 04:15 PM   #9
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[corlor=red]ya'll got that Mid-West style flow, quick flow but not on no Twista shit though...

lyrically this is aiight, quality could be better, track is good for what it is...ya'll got flow, just gotta do something different with it cuz I cantell ya'll on that Mid-West ish...good ish kydz ...[/color]
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LV - real talk as usual..dope shit
you're like the best story teller over a beat

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my whole album is inspired by you LV.
thats how i got this classic album.
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Old 08-07-05, 08:56 PM   #10
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Aight, just peeping this, almost forgot to..... beat's somethin i'd fux wit.

-Mystery: you decent, ya flow was str8... your emotion's missing..

-Hook: straight.. lyrically coulda been better

-Six: your flow was good, you know it was right on and what not.. your lyrics can be upped some..

basically y'all emotion can be increased somewhat, make people tremble at hearing y'all say "Get Sound Check"!!.. i like the bump in y'all hook tho, sound like y'all bouncin and what not... set up nicely.. it's pretty okay for what it was.
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Old 08-07-05, 09:10 PM   #11
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its str8 good job....i realli cant say much kuzz there aint much to say but keep it up the only thing i say will be to up tha vocab.....thaz about it

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