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07-31-05, 03:38 PM | #16 | |||
Just searching.
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IP: 3240 794D
Wordox. This was pretty good, but some of it didn't rhyme. Teenage pregnancy is no laughing matter, and neither is abortion or shit... can't really say the topic is original, but it's a sad one nevertheless. You going to show your girl these pieces? Keep on dropping them, let out some emotions, don't go all sadist because I like impaling sadists.
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08-02-05, 04:03 PM | #17 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: 6C96 7CBB
uppin............................................. .
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08-03-05, 07:23 PM | #18 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: 6618 2DB7
uppin this ................
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08-03-05, 08:15 PM | #19 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 28AD 5545
very emotional....rhyme scheme was kinda off but emotion held up for it umm vocab u needa up that......and just keep lettin out ur emotions.......ur doin good.....hey rtf on my o/m please its in my sig
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08-03-05, 09:41 PM | #20 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: 8E00 B5EB
thx.....uppin........
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08-04-05, 10:39 PM | #21 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: B827 DCC6
thats was nice, but yo the situation was bad but ya flow as good
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08-05-05, 11:14 PM | #22 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: 8BB1 F522
uppin............................................
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08-06-05, 02:54 AM | #23 | ||||||
Light Weight
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IP: E2C6 310B
u ruined ur chicks life if u really gave her that shit......yung ass kids thinkin that shits a game wear a condom out of respect for your girl....u dont love her...thats selfish shit.....if u truly loved her you woulda never did that shit....as for your story u need to elevate a lot....
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08-06-05, 03:09 AM | #24 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: 8BB1 F522
uppin............................................. ..
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