hmm...the topic is good the fact yall ramble on about being good n shit like vango really did is retarded, vango you have potential but if you really wanna be a good writer i suggest you focus on writin with a spirit, ya know more emotion imagery, the flow was good from both of you atticus you did pretty good your half was a bit different the flow was good you had some metas but imagery was a lil weak emotion was good though, overall nice om i'd like to see some more from both.

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