Voted For: Tekneek

Vote for Tekneek.. in the begining of this verse.. the structure was perfect.. i could feel the flow with no problem.. punches were strong with decent personals.. personals couldve been better but they were there..
Multis were phenominal..i saw more multis from tekneek in a few lines than in PAYNs whole verse..

Payn.. some of ur lines didnt make sense.. and alot didnt rhyme.. ill break down ur first part to show you..

Dawg u couldnt hit me wit a punch if i was Movin in Slow Mo
so, "Craig Davis", return to R&B and to Doin ya Solo's
(this was alright.. but craig Davis? where did that come from?)

Whats worse is u Know Tho..but put it to use..its Knowledge
u could use some..lookin nappy as a dude who'd be workin McDonald's
(knowledge doesnt rhyme with McDonalds.. and the first line has ntohing to do with the 2nd)

no College n doin it for years..but still never Witness Promotions
never gettin tha Notion that he looks greasier than Fish In the Ocean
(this was the better of ur lines i guess.. but i dont think fish are greasy..)

this Kid should've Noticed..i aint the type to be delivered Fillers n Brag Lines
cuz im a Killer who Has Rhymes that intoxicate like a 'Miller' when u've Had 9!*
(this makes no sense to me.. first u say ur not the type that brags.. and in the next line.. u brag about being a killer with great rhymes.. this lost me)

All in All v/Tekneek

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