http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=126036

"For The Starving Bitch"

Word...fuckin faggot got shitted on...

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2380866
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2380876

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L.E...u have good lyrics and I like ur voice

but u ride beats wrong...it's like u choose the "down"beat to flow on versus riding the whole beat or the "up" beat...It's like if u count 1,2,3,4...white people clap on the 1 and 3...black people (with rhythm) clap on the 2 & 4...Experiment with flowing on different points of the beat...cuz it makes ur flow sound jerky and choppy...ur not owning this beat at all...

but I like ur presentation other than that

pretty decent track homie



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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

beats iite...yea ur rythm is off... also u need to learn bein on beat does not mean just landin on da snare.... lyrics are cool delivery is iite.... ur flow speeds up n slows down... ur too concious of da snare just work on ur flow cos its real stop start rite now and doesnt maintain any consistancy at all.. laters

**Smashes Mic In Frustration And Goes And Gets High**

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Ite....aside from the fact that it's directed to me...I'ma give you props.I thought this was some good shit here.Flow was lil off at times with the beat...but it was good.
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But once I'm get my mic soon....I'ma clap back..count on it

u have a good voice for rappin and ya lyricz are.....decent? maybe but ur flow is all wrong at partz....i mean damn we all have cool edit or some program were u can edit shit just keep flowing till u get it right ok?

and umm well whateva u shit on him kuzz he cant spit back at u yet...but umm i have fam upin trinidad..but i wont take it personal kuzz it aint about me

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