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Old 09-10-05, 07:59 AM   #1
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Check This Out N Tell Me Wut You Think

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Yo Wuddup I Just Put Some Music On Soundclick.com For The First Time................check It Out N Gimme Some Feedback.........

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=402547

.................................cezar And Tony Green Please Pardon Yaselves On This One Man I Aint Trynna Argue Wit You Boys No More............tony I Did Hear Ya Music And I Feel U Nor The Quality Of Ya Tracks Is Not Even Close So Plz Get At Me On A Later Date If You Wanna Talk......................everyone Else Gimme Some From The Heart Feedback Aight And Let Me Know Which Click Is Poppin The Most Aight..........................in A Minute!
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Old 09-10-05, 08:10 AM   #2
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Ima get my audio leader to see what he thinks.
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Old 09-10-05, 08:35 AM   #3
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not my style BUT you can flow deliver well, lyrically nothing special, thats your draw back in my opinion, simple lyrics, but i say yes cos ur not sum wack wannabe u have skill, just try uppin ur lyrics abit...safe
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Old 09-10-05, 08:37 AM   #4
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Good lookin manm LL will accept you, let us know.
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Old 09-10-05, 09:55 AM   #5
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Good Lookin So Far.............and Yo Just Keep It Real And Say Wut You Feel...........i Only Put 3 Tracks On It In Which I Made Sometime In The Last Yr Or 2.......i Didnt Put Anything From This Yr On It Cuz I Know If Yall Accept Then You Really Gon Luv What I Got In Stock...................

For The Two Resposes.........good Looks For Keepin It 100.........

To The Dude That Says It Wasnt His Style And Im Lyrically Nuttin Special..........cool But I Came On As A New York Battle Rapper So Understand My Wrd Play From A Lot Of Dudes On Here Is More Exciting Rather Than More Inteligent, Ummm Lemme See.......like In A Rap A Lot Of Dudes Would Say........ "i Lyrically Murder Cats" While I Would Say "i Shyt On Niggas" ..............punchlines And Metaphors Is Definitely Gonna Sell A Hell Of A Lot More Than Anything Else Cuz You Puttin What You're Sayin In Perspective, You're Paintin A Picture In Someones Mind With Things They Can Relate To....metaphors And Punchlines Is The Key..........and Mines Are Not Simple At All...........i Write Them To Make Someone Be Like How The Fuk Did He Think Of Somethin Like That............and A Example:

In My Crib I Keep A Gage In It
Braids Keep A Maze In It
Ball (8-ball) In My Car
Like Im Trynna Shoot Jays In It
Fuk Dro Its Haze In It
My Lisense Plate Say J-boog
Cuz It'll Prolly B2k's In It.......

...........you Feel Me.......lol And Im Puttin That In A Song................but Good Lookin Out Baby Imma Holla At You Boys Aight..............1
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Old 09-10-05, 10:02 AM   #6
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safe yea i kno wat u mean bout the selling thing, im doin my thing offline too, but im in UK n our whole sound n vibe is totally different, i like metas similies wordplay etc but i also like sick rhyme schemes and nice vocab variation
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Old 09-10-05, 01:24 PM   #7
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This nigga is better than 90% of the RV in Audio,He got the best flow in the RV
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Old 09-10-05, 06:00 PM   #8
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OMFG this track sounds familar as hell I think RV got a biter I swear to god I heard that exact song before and it wasn't from a nigga named J -Five
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Old 09-10-05, 08:10 PM   #9
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omg tony is u fukn serious lol..........i personally put in the first post that i didnt want to argue wit u son...........u not nice.........all u do is hate...........ya flow sux............and u neva keep it real wit ya self...............how the fuk did i bite off of somebody on rv..........my best of album came out last yr son and let me mind you that i havent been on rv a wk yet.........i havent even been on this rapverse shit a wk yet.......ya own fukn man from ya click said i was the nicest nigga on rv and you all mad n shit........son just keep it smooth wit me cuz you makn yaself lookin bad in front of all these ppl and you embarassin ya click man, its not a good look for you at all........and you sayin im bitin lmao...if my mouse wasnt fukd up i wouldve had my whole album on that shit already.........now you on the otha hand got nuttin but bullshit on there...........before i heard ya shyt i was like this nigga talkin a lot so he must be suntin to be fukn cuz u dumb cocky, but when i heard it i damn near fell out my chair laughin so hard....ya wordplay sux, ya beats is trash, and the quality of ya shit is horrible (you must be usin that 5 dollar mike you was tellin -cezar- about lmao.....broke nigga).......get yo ass in the studio and stop playin wit me talkin bout im bitin.........nigga please
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Old 09-11-05, 12:30 AM   #10
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I never said you bited from RV I said you bit from another artist and uploaded is shit and puttin on as if it was yours I'm talkin to strobe bout it you'll prolly be banned if I find the site!
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Old 09-11-05, 03:47 AM   #11
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i dont think he'll be banned...cuz it wasnt like he was battling anybody...but if that is you then ya nice but ya text is weak....but w/e atleast ya got flow cuz barely anybody here can stay on beat...
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Old 09-11-05, 03:51 AM   #12
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Bitch Its My Fukn Album You Dik How The Fuk Can I Upload Somebody Else Shit As If It Was Mines.....didnt I Just Tell Ya Dumb As I Just Came Off Tour So Who The Hell Got Time For All That Lmao.............its My Fukn Voice N I Say J-five In All My Tracks You Fukn Retard.............aww Man U Cant Give A Nigga Props For Nuttin....................and Whoever You Talkin To About The Site Can Suk My Dik Too Cuz You'll Neva Find A Song Like Mines Cuz It Was Neva Put Out On The Net....................matter Fact Fuk All This Talkin Im Bout To Make A Song About Yo Ass........its A Wrap For You..............see Me In The Audio Nigga..........1
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Old 09-11-05, 04:01 AM   #13
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Yo I Really Dont Wanna Even Chit Chat Wit This Dude No More, First He Said Im Corny N All This Otha Shit But As Soon As I Put Some Shit Up For Him To Hear He Wanna Say That Im Bitin Off Of Somebody Else Shit, Like Im Really Upoladin Somebody Hardwork N Effort And Actin Like Its Mine........nigga I Gave You Actuall Websites To Go Look At N All That.........gave You Actually Pictures And Actuall Information......................you See How Nice I Am And Now It Cant Be True To You.........man Get The Fuk Outta Here..................what Made Him Tight Is When His Man From Trigga Inc Said I Was The Hottest Nigga On Rv...........................
.............................all Jokes And Stupid Shyt Aside Yo Cezar Tell Ya Boy Get Off My Nutts................i Came To Do Me, Not Prove That Im Who I Say I Am.........................aww Man Im Really Tigth Right Now
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Old 09-11-05, 04:07 AM   #14
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idk about the best on RV right now but yeah ya got flow but flow doesnt say much if ya aint lyrical all the time and original....and tony green aint my boy i just say a few words to him thats it....werd
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Old 09-11-05, 04:38 AM   #15
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Lol Son I Aint Even Worried About The Nigga............i Know Im Consistent, Original, And Creative.........you'll Neva Hear Two Of Songs That Sound Alike....man W/e Im Done .....................
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