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09-18-05, 08:40 PM

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Eh, The Only Thing It Really Had Was Good Flow.

Cuz You Used That Two Syllabol Multie Scheme Throughout.

But It Lacked Strong Enough Metas
... You Had A Lot Of Chances For Dope Metas And Detailed Emotion,
Beings How You Were Writing About A Woman,
... But You Just Lacked Them And Missed The Opportunities.

Never The Less, Good To See You Back
... I'll Be Watching For A More Polished Piece.

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