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Old 09-19-05, 05:26 PM   #1
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Intermental-Calling You Out!(Hot Track!)

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calling you out

its gona be on my mixtape called voices to beats

beat made by me

hot track

i left feed on e.c's and tha q track
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Old 09-19-05, 07:59 PM   #2
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Old 09-19-05, 08:54 PM   #3
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i would peep but soundclick is gay, the soundclick player wont open, so i cant play no tracks
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Old 09-20-05, 06:45 AM   #4
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got sum1 to download n send me it

beats cool, intermental, needs alot more emotion, delivery is ok concidering the lack of emotion... flow is very sloppy, hook i dont like at all... yeah not reall feelin it, intermental knows what he needs to improve on so all good
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Old 09-20-05, 02:03 PM   #5
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Ite thanks man, upppin........
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Old 09-20-05, 04:48 PM   #6
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Old 09-20-05, 05:19 PM   #7
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Old 09-20-05, 08:00 PM   #8
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beat and tone of the track very dark...I like that

INter...u have a uncanny way of adapting ur delivery to match the beat...the tone of the beat...which is nice

however, I agree that ur flow cudda been more consistent...U'll ride the beat nice for a couple bars, then u'll try to squeeze too many syllables in one line, which throws the flow off


and the hook is well delivered, if not particularly catchy



not a bad track dawg


I liked the sound of it...just needs more polish


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Old 09-20-05, 10:52 PM   #9
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*listening as typing*

the beat is really good i suppose speats made it. if he did hes doin good. intermental i think this was alright your flow is sketchy at times, not as good as your other tracks i think, your lyrics were good, nice lil hook to it. overall i think you did alright coulda been better from you, i know you can do better.

can ya rtf on my new track "Pains creativity"

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Old 09-21-05, 02:15 PM   #10
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Old 09-21-05, 02:56 PM   #11
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aight....listenin like the beat like the intro like sum of the lines u improved since i last heard u u folw good i dont know y ppl say u fell off i think u dun well good shit
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Old 09-21-05, 02:58 PM   #12
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Old 09-21-05, 04:03 PM   #13
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this shyt was koo the beat was tight bt the style was just not my type!i might make me a callout myself but this shyt was koo i mean better than most shyt i heard feel me!holla back atcha boy !
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Old 09-21-05, 04:04 PM   #14
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Thank you, glad you came back aint hollered atCHa in a minute.......
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