I loved how u tackled the whole issue. Emotion was great, but wat really got me was the imagery. especially
A fat lady sang from her domestic rooftop
She said so long to the city she loved

^^^thats powerful imagery, and i liked the atlantis line. overall i'd say 9/10 but thats only cuz nothings perfect!! lol

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This is my sig. what?

I'm white so u KNOW i can't rap =)

I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks!