this joint was ok. you had real good structure and nice flow in there. there was some real nice imagery in there which helped you your picture what you were trynna create.
overall this was a good piece. i give it an 8.5/10 keep doin ya thing.

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Lick Shots=Hitchcock feat Paul Cain and The Sick One
Opposite of Cold= The Cartel
Dear Others=Hitchcock
Kill That Static=Hitchcock